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Published: 2004-03-28 02:07:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 148; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 51
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Description Come and find me
I’m here
Somewhere in between
In between the lies you’ll find me
Hiding myself
So they can never find me
I’ve hid myself so long
I can’t see where the act ends
And I begin
Come and find me
I’m here
I’m in between myself and her
My other part
She’s the act
She’s not real
Go backstage
Meet the actress
Come and find me
I’m here
Somewhere in between the lies
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Comments: 8

quintessa27 [2004-03-29 01:29:14 +0000 UTC]

great job--sorry if your having a rough time *hug*.

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venusdemon108 In reply to quintessa27 [2004-03-29 02:47:40 +0000 UTC]

*hugs back* thanks

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moldycheesepuff [2004-03-28 18:50:55 +0000 UTC]

thats really good! i like it ver much! gj!

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SpyderJade [2004-03-28 05:35:25 +0000 UTC]

Very good!
The idea of living lies (or at least different truths) is something everyone can relate to, I think. At least, anyone who's been through high school... *laughs*
The repetition of "in between" is good, it pushes the poem along. I like the "backtage...actress" part as well, it's a great concept.
Anyway, yeah, short is sometimes good. This comes across well. Kudos.

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Lecco [2004-03-28 04:58:40 +0000 UTC]

I love "Go back stage; meet the actress." The actress of her own life. Just an interesting concept. Poignant, if short, still poignant.

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venusdemon108 In reply to Lecco [2004-03-28 05:00:50 +0000 UTC]

i have a bad habit of acting through my life and not even realizing it, so in a way i am the actress of my own life.

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mournfulcrow [2004-03-28 04:56:47 +0000 UTC]

Kay i would help you if i could....but the only person that can is you. I hope you feel better, u can do it. I know you can.

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michelletenoh [2004-03-28 02:40:51 +0000 UTC]

That is... how I feel...

if you're on tomorrow I'll explain it to you.

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