Comments: 15
Seattle-Fox [2015-02-14 16:23:59 +0000 UTC]
Good story. This is a good plot at the music store.
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Verjungte-Vollerei In reply to HunterWolfTraveler [2012-06-14 15:28:30 +0000 UTC]
I have a lot of scenarios playing through my head, but they're proving a bit difficult to render into words. I mean, I have a few ideas in how they expand. Such as inflation, weight gain, and mpreg. Those three are my main interests... But I am not sure of a plot...
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animatedfantasy [2012-06-09 20:56:07 +0000 UTC]
Not bad. I like the re imagining of the tale.
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animatedfantasy In reply to Verjungte-Vollerei [2012-06-12 00:11:06 +0000 UTC]
Other then have him pig out even more? XD Um maybe a bit more belly description in my opinion. But I think you did great for your first story.
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Verjungte-Vollerei In reply to animatedfantasy [2012-06-13 19:25:34 +0000 UTC]
I was thinking the same thing after I posted it. Thanks though! Now to figure out wha to write next.
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FasterChrissykins [2012-05-30 07:08:56 +0000 UTC]
Its rather good from your first attempt :3 And well cleaned up from the last copy I have seen. well done!
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