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I'm still around.Wacom Intuos4 | PS CS3 | ~ELECTROpanda
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the buildings in the background are really thoughtfully lit, and everything up to the middleground is very clear with a great amount of interest. if theres any critique here, i would say adding some bounce light into the foreground, especially on the character, would help a bit. a whiter, diffused light source would still keep the person in the dark, but add form to its back and act as an eye catch.
your layout already works great for this; the eye will be dragged in a diagonal towards the character even more than it already does.
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Thanks so much for the comment!
I realised much of those points after having uploaded it; working in the pitch dark on a monitor that needs recalibration does things to your perception of light. I'm still glad for you pointing it out though, it'll definitely be another reminder to check such things before calling it done!
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the background looks so gooooood, but the body!! D:
the figure looks like a clay doll kids would make.
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Nice work. I like the subtlety of the figure in the black. The lines of the 'frame' and buildings guide the eye in an interesting way. The bits of light are a nice touch, especially with the inclusion of the birds.
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It looks great overall, but I agree with tigaer. With a light on near my monitor, I didn't even see the person.
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i find the person very hard to see. but the rest looks not bad
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