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Published: 2007-10-24 20:17:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 786; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 57
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At last, , a sketch of the Kiba + Hinata piece I started this past summer--I cannot apologise enough for having to put this on the backburner due to AWA.For everyone else, I apologise for posting Naruto fan art. I know you're all tired of it, but look at it this way: it's not yaoi, it's not softcore porn, and it's a fairly uncommon pairing. I thank you in advance for not throwing things at me.
I plan to revise much about this piece since I feel I've evolved artistically between when I sketched this and now...but please feel free to give me your input, guys!
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Comments: 15
So pretty, I love how you drew this...expecially akamaru, his noes is like a button!
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Awww if only you finished it i want to see it in colour
so badly
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Well, thank you! I'm working on colouring it right now! I'm amazed at how many people like this sketch and this pairing!
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Dont be its really awsome
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NARUTO FAN ART?! WHAT IS THIS TRAVESTY?!
I mean...
Her arm that's closest to us looks a little awkward, although sitting on a large fluffy thing like that would be a little hard. Maybe it's just me, but eh. Looks good regardless
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Oohh You must finish it! please?! I love Kibahina!
As for the crit: I think Akamaru's head is a bit oversized... Other than that, everything looks good so far. ^^
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AWESOME its here finally
Dont worry though, i totally give you permission to do a fanart this time
Ill take care of anybody who has any objections *cracks knuckles and scowls*
hinata is so cute here, dare i say cuter that the original style hinata? 
oh and my crit: I think kiba should have 4 arms, and hinata should be cosplaying as morrigan from darkstalkers! hmmmm i think the setting should be in outer space also. Lastly i think you should make akamaru into a cyborg!!!
but hey thats just me
(please dont take this offensively its clearly a joke. i do like how its going so far. Cant wait for a cleaner version)
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And thank you for your comment about Hinata--I'm more of a fan of her pre-Shippuden design, but I had seen some fanarts of her Shippuden look that made it more favourable, so I tried to play it off of that.
And thank you, THANK YOU for being patient with me on this! Things are finally slowing down and I'm getting my artistic groove back, so this piece can be coloured and pretty!
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DO IT FAGGET 8D
seriously, that would be cool in a lulz sorta way.
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Mmkay! Here we go.
I love the overall feel of it. Seems serene.
But only a couple things are bugging me, and you've probably already seen them, but I dunno. Anywho, Hinata's left elbow and forearm are kinda wonky. Just something about it just dosen't seem right.. Hmm...
And then there's Kiba's eyes. He seems to be looking past her, rather than at her. Maybe tilt his head a little more so the line of their eyes connect a tad better. This is something I always have a problem with too.
Hope this helps a little
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Hey; any and all constructive critiquing I get helps immensely--and your input is definitely what I'm looking to read, because the things you pointed out didn't even occur to me--it's why I often post these sketches because I need a second pair of eyes--and as you can see, I'm not one to spazz when someone has something constructive to say about my work; I want to keep improving and make my final pieces awesome. Thanks a bunch for the input!
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No problem. 
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SO cute! I'll try to give you a more constructive comment later, since it says you want a bit of a critique.
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