VIII-Bit In reply to CobaltSorcerer [2019-12-02 05:46:18 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the feedback. Hmm. Well, I didn't intend to allude to this being a retaliation at all. I tried to write it implying that this was an unprovoked thing and that this is kind of a bad guy winning scenario. Sinister and fucked is definitely apt there. I know usually there's some kind of justification for people getting changed against their will, but I decided not to include that just to do something different. Though like you say, you can definitely interpret it as a retaliation, there's just no big evidence of it in the story. Honestly, either interpretation is valid.
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Cabbitgurl [2019-11-08 04:16:07 +0000 UTC]
What a creep... I kind of wonder how this started? How did he trick his best friend into thinking he's human? That he's not a monster in human skin?
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