darkicefx [2006-01-16 23:53:47 +0000 UTC]
She is quite a beauty. I absolutely love the outfit. I am only going to comment on this one, and my comment applies to both images.
Although you have the gorgeous model, the wonderful play of colors, and artistic elements, these shots don't exhibit any control aesthetically that would make for a nice shot... I'm not sure how I would explain this, they are nice shots, and I'm sure they turned to your liking, but I would really love to see more shots that play off the body, face, and fashion of the individual. The legs, the eyes, jawline, the nice pinstripe blazer over a lighter toned floral print blouse... so much could be shown in a better atmosphere. Please do a more of a studio shot with her, I think they would come out amazing.
When I look at her, I immediately think of the type of success you could have pitting her in a more "Avva" photo... You know what I mean, the photos they have of the Avva brand showcasing the different items. That's how I envision her and that's something I would be very interested in seeing.
There are two interesting focal points of the two images. Of image one, it is her shadow. I love how her provocative pose is underscored by a modest and almost introverted shadow. If you look at the contrast, it's very thought provoking. Of image two, it is her pose. Her body line draws you up from the top (naturally your first impression is to start at the "bottom") and as you follow the cuves up, her arms break the flow and you stop at her face. Lo and behold, it's a beautiful sight.
I think the main point of this reply is that... well... I want more. I want more of her, and I want her in a better and more controlled, sharp, atmosphere.
Nice to see something new from you though. Keep it up Sam.
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viktorvondoom In reply to darkicefx [2006-01-17 00:07:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank sir. As these are my first photos of this sort, your input will be taken to heart and applied. With that said, look at the rest of the photos in the series, I'd like to hear your thoughts on those as well.
Also, you can rest assured that you will see more of my dear Ivey in the future.
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