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VioKun — 'Till the end of the world

Published: 2011-08-17 09:18:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 1171; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 4
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Description 'Till the end of the world, I'll follow you.
Now, This is probably hard to tell, but they're sitting on a rock that's behind a water fall.
Well, if you have ever RP'd with me you know that Vio is terrified by water. He'll push you into it, and run like hell.
But, of course he'd follow Vaati anywhere. Anywhere. No matter what.
This place is located in the secret location where Vio took Vaati for their honeymoon. Vio asked Vaati if he could teach him how to swim, of course, Vaati happily agreed. Now, Vaati fell asleep on me right here so I'm gonna give this to you in story form XD

Vio looked over at the massive waterfall that was before him. He couldn't lie, it scared him, he didn't think Vaati would take them this far from their camp and to such a dangerous place to teach him.
Seeing Vio's expression Vaati snickered softly at him, "Don't worry Vio, the first step is simply getting over your fear... You won't be swimming in that..." He grabbed Vio's hand gently, tugging him closer to the edge. He knew this terrified Vio as he stepped off the edge, dragging the terrified teen after him.
Vio was in far too much shock to scream before he felt his feet on solid ground again. Vaati has used his wind to make the landing gentle.
Vio sighed in relief, thinking that Vaati had just put him back on the ground before his eyes widened in shocked realizing the water was roaring right in his ear and he was quickly becoming soaked.
He was instantly clinging to Vaati, his hands trembling as his face paled slightly. "I-I don't want to be in this," he stammered, starting to panic.
Vaati simply ignored him as he pulled the boy down into a sitting position and started to pet his hair gently, looking at him. "You're fine, Vio, calm down..."
They stayed this way for several moments until Vio had calmed down; mostly.
Vio glanced around,realizing that the water wasn't hurting him in anyway and smiled slightly. He wanted to catch Vaati off guard so he suddenly grabbed onto the side of his face, prepared to kiss him, a hand also on his shoulder so he could balance himself. He changed his mind and simply snuggled his face into the boy's cheek, smiling.
"Thank you so much... I love you, Vaati~"
------ The End.
I think that just broke my writer's block. Lol. You like? I do. XD
This is a gift for
Check 'em out! They're awesome!! >u<
She also has full rights to color this line art. She has been given permission.
Ah, yes! Credits!!

Base by ~sniickers
Line art by =VioKun
Coloring by =VioKun
Idea by ~BlueLinkOCD !! >u<
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Comments: 36

G0dSEeD [2011-08-17 22:56:54 +0000 UTC]

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Technique

Impact


Vision:
Yaoi fandom ain't my thing...but that's just me. I'll give you the fact that you put it up for people who are into that.

Originality:
Unfortunately, I've seen this before. Many times, too. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Sad)"/> It's not a bad thing, really. I mean, one can't generate their own idea entirely.

Technique:
Using a base?
Sorry, that doesn't exactly go over well with the less-hardcore fans. But that's by far the best base cover-up I've seen.

Impact:
Well, whatever I can say here is pretty much exactly the same as what I said in the first two categories. Soooo...

Summary:
Ain't the most original piece I've ever come across, but at least you tried to cover up the fact that you used a base. I see you even edited out an eye and ear or two. It's not terrible, and I'm sure you have more potential buried deep within you. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
So that's my e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t… " width="30" height="15" alt="" title="Here's my $0.02"/> here, you decide if it's fair or not.

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VioKun In reply to G0dSEeD [2011-08-17 23:18:55 +0000 UTC]

I have to say seeing a critique scared me...

But thank you so much ~ ^ ^ I understand what you meant... ~

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G0dSEeD In reply to VioKun [2011-08-17 23:33:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for understanding.

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VioKun In reply to G0dSEeD [2011-08-18 05:47:44 +0000 UTC]

Mhm ~ ^ ^

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eluwaruburu [2013-03-11 01:38:16 +0000 UTC]

Aaaw... I love the Vaavio *u* I loved your fic ^^

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VioKun In reply to eluwaruburu [2013-08-04 05:50:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you,  I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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ubfunnky [2012-01-14 21:17:49 +0000 UTC]

YAY! I've been looking for a picture like this! I role play as vaati and they both were together too Yay! Please draw more pics like thisss

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VioKun In reply to ubfunnky [2012-01-15 03:38:14 +0000 UTC]

I don't think there will be, Vaati & I broke up.

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ubfunnky In reply to VioKun [2012-01-18 01:04:31 +0000 UTC]

Awww....*sadness vaati and vio didn't break up yet in my role play ._.

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VioKun In reply to ubfunnky [2012-01-19 04:00:24 +0000 UTC]

I'm sowwie =/

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ShadowsOfThePast1 [2011-10-30 22:27:24 +0000 UTC]

DAMN!!! THATS GOOD!!! a base never hurts~...seeing of how i color lineart people make....

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VioKun In reply to ShadowsOfThePast1 [2011-10-31 03:51:14 +0000 UTC]

I hate using bases now...

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ShadowsOfThePast1 In reply to VioKun [2011-11-02 00:03:16 +0000 UTC]

ah i see. bases kinda destroy the fun and challenge of a drawing! however they sure make things a heck of a lot easier.

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VioKun In reply to ShadowsOfThePast1 [2011-11-02 00:06:24 +0000 UTC]

I suppose...

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zeldagirlz [2011-08-18 01:30:56 +0000 UTC]

AAAWWWW!!! SOOO CUTE!

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VioKun In reply to zeldagirlz [2011-08-18 05:46:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ~

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zeldagirlz In reply to VioKun [2011-08-18 15:36:58 +0000 UTC]

linkXvaati is one of my fav zelda yaoi couples

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VioKun In reply to zeldagirlz [2011-08-18 19:01:46 +0000 UTC]

Cool ~ x3

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Redangelsblush4 [2011-08-17 16:38:29 +0000 UTC]

awwwz.....THATS SO CUUUUTE!!!!!...i think i have good inspiration for a new picture :3

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VioKun In reply to Redangelsblush4 [2011-08-17 21:49:54 +0000 UTC]

Yay ~ ^ ^

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Blu3L1nkOCD [2011-08-17 14:16:15 +0000 UTC]

Huh???
Vio how come I got credit!
I don't deserve any credit!
This is your guys AMAZING picture!
Very cute story too!
Vio, you're so cool!

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VioKun In reply to Blu3L1nkOCD [2011-08-17 22:01:49 +0000 UTC]

Because you made an amazing picture <3

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Blu3L1nkOCD In reply to VioKun [2011-08-17 22:08:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much O_O

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VioKun In reply to Blu3L1nkOCD [2011-08-17 22:13:03 +0000 UTC]

No problem ~

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KiddyGal [2011-08-17 10:50:32 +0000 UTC]

i love this~

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VioKun In reply to KiddyGal [2011-08-17 10:57:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank chu ~

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KiddyGal In reply to VioKun [2011-08-17 11:45:15 +0000 UTC]

your welcome~

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VioKun In reply to KiddyGal [2011-08-17 11:51:41 +0000 UTC]

You're*

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KiddyGal In reply to VioKun [2011-08-17 11:57:10 +0000 UTC]

XD you got me. thanks~

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VioKun In reply to KiddyGal [2011-08-17 12:11:30 +0000 UTC]

No problem ~*tackles*

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KiddyGal In reply to VioKun [2011-08-17 13:04:39 +0000 UTC]

gah! >.< why must you tackle? XD

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VioKun In reply to KiddyGal [2011-08-17 13:10:12 +0000 UTC]

You don't like it?

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KiddyGal In reply to VioKun [2011-08-17 14:07:52 +0000 UTC]

XD oh god! >///>

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VioKun In reply to KiddyGal [2011-08-17 22:08:05 +0000 UTC]

Lol!

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IceFire541 [2011-08-17 10:44:14 +0000 UTC]

Aww that's very cute :3
(I remebered when you pushed me into the water and ran XD)

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VioKun In reply to IceFire541 [2011-08-17 10:47:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much ~ ! ^ ^

(Lol I do that to everyone XD)

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