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allieryan [2011-03-28 18:52:52 +0000 UTC]
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Once I saw how long and detailed my comment was becoming, I decided that an official critique was warranted.
For this piece alone, I can see immediate improvement (particularly compared with some of your other work of this couple in particular). Since I'm one of your watchers, I know that you have been focused on adding a "Disney-esque" feel to your work; or basically just adapting your original, wonderful style to include aspects such as a movement/clothing that Disney is well-known for. I find this piece serves as a happy medium between your original style, and the Disney influence you were looking for. Even though this image is a still frame, it looks like the pair could be dancing, or simply that Flynn was pulling Rapunzel in for that special kiss.
Technique: The line style itself fits perfectly with this piece. The minimalistic emphasis adds more depth to the emotions within this work. And yet by adding the little "sparkles" and lace of Rapunzel's dress, just make the image pop. The color scheme is absolutely wonderful. It's light and merry, with even a hint of romance with the pinks and purples mixed with the yellows. The mood is just so fitting!
Originality: I love how you added your own spin with the characters. They are clearly not carbon-copies of Disney's creation. Your own style and spunk are visibly evident, making this piece much more original.
Shortly, you captured the characters amazingly without losing yourself in the process. This is definitely my favorite among your Tangled work. It clearly exemplifies those iconic lyrics:
"And at last, I see the light
And it's like the fog has lifted
And at last, I see the light
And it's like the sky is new
And it's warm and real and bright
And the world has somehow shifted
All at once, everything looks different
Now that I see you.
Now that I see you."
("I See the Light" - Alan Menken from Disney's Tangled)
I hope you were able to understand all of this, as I do know English is not your native language, but I just loved this piece so much had to write this down.
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allieryan In reply to viria13 [2011-08-21 05:29:56 +0000 UTC]
Late reply:
You're welcome! It's a wonderful piece and fitting of a spectacular movie.
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Gwynhwyfer [2011-03-26 21:37:29 +0000 UTC]
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I saw this movie a while back, and absolutely fell in love with it. The reasons were because the characters were the cookie cutter disney stereotypes, with dimension and enough individuality to please both the little disney addict, and the mature person in me.
You managed to portray this really well in this piece. By keeping a simple, glowing background, you manage to give the viewer a feel of warmth and mysticism, much like the magical glowing theme of the lake theme and song.
Your style really fits the work, as it's minimal and flowing. The angular lines, while not perfectly suited to Rapunzel's character, fits Eugene amazingly.
I also like the small details you added, sucj as the lace on her dress hem, as it maintains the whimsical sketchiness while showing the amount of work and thought that actually went into the work. It also makes Rapunzel more like the fun loving, lacy female herione she really is.
Overall, it's a lovely piece, and of all your Tangled fanart, this is definitely my favourite. Similar to your older piece, 'You Became My New Dream", I adore the feel of this one, and I think you grasped the characters and personalities better in this work, as you can see Eugene's tight hugging of Rapunzel, showing his evolution throughout the movie, and the almost overzealous response of Rapunzel. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
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viria13 In reply to Gwynhwyfer [2011-03-26 21:42:35 +0000 UTC]
oohh,thank you very much for your critique!I do really much appreciate it.
You noticed this piece is similar to "you became my new dream",yeah..it was like update version of that one,which I didn't really like..I though about deleting that.
thank you again:3
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tigergirl48051 [2016-01-31 18:01:35 +0000 UTC]
Seriously every picture with Punzie and Eugene males me die inside
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peridot870 [2014-03-20 19:58:17 +0000 UTC]
do you sell these?
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Dream-Angel-Artista [2013-06-05 04:08:06 +0000 UTC]
looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove! XD
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Titanairbenderpony [2012-08-25 04:44:00 +0000 UTC]
i. love. you.
you're artistic style is amazing and the colors and you love harry potter, avatar, tangled SAIHDSAUNFIU I just love you so much right now!! You inspire me to draw ^.^
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kyri-lynn-panda [2012-06-27 06:57:16 +0000 UTC]
I desperately need to stop looking at your stuff. TTATT
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sapphireswimming [2012-04-30 16:14:55 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful. I love the style and sepia coloring here. As always, this is just gorgeous. You draw everything so that it's so pretty!
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PensivePisces [2012-03-10 00:21:53 +0000 UTC]
good wedding scene
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iloveyouerin [2012-02-28 05:54:36 +0000 UTC]
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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x-pink-tutu-x [2012-02-13 18:54:51 +0000 UTC]
Love it! Really hope you'll enter our valentine's contest over at
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kenyrandy666 [2012-01-26 21:15:20 +0000 UTC]
x3 is, is... is beautyful!!!
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paulover [2011-10-22 16:24:41 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE THIS! The dress is so beautiful! You have a lot of talent!
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bluebelle-88 [2011-10-22 06:31:36 +0000 UTC]
Not going to write a critique. Just going to sat I love the colour scheme so close to her hair colour.
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awakening-rEVOLution [2011-09-25 14:52:27 +0000 UTC]
your artwork. i just can't get enough of it!
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forgot2say [2011-08-12 23:35:16 +0000 UTC]
BEAUTIFUL.
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LonelyCitadel [2011-08-06 21:58:30 +0000 UTC]
I absolutely LOVE this.
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Tobi501 [2011-07-24 05:19:53 +0000 UTC]
Magic, magic everywhere
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camille31376 [2011-06-25 09:43:33 +0000 UTC]
breathtaking
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Patsuko [2011-06-22 21:12:09 +0000 UTC]
Keep drawing, these are so good.
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Kataang-crazy [2011-06-01 17:23:39 +0000 UTC]
awww <3
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Reminiscexx [2011-05-31 22:12:20 +0000 UTC]
Ugh, I'm in love with this! Her dress is so gorgeous.
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jurodo [2011-05-22 21:18:47 +0000 UTC]
*sobs* IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL! Rapunzel's out of her mind to fathom waiting to marry him!
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Anni-kun [2011-05-21 17:01:37 +0000 UTC]
I really love the color schemes and poses you use... Let me tell you, you can really capture couples in an extremely awesome way <3 I can just feel the warmth!
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crimsonyaoilover [2011-05-18 23:25:47 +0000 UTC]
wow i like this pic
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oddismyhomeboy [2011-05-18 23:23:25 +0000 UTC]
I want a print of this more than anything.
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YWYH-s--Morelenmir [2011-05-15 04:58:58 +0000 UTC]
Flynn and Rapunzel...so beautiful and lovely...
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Midnight4200 [2011-05-07 01:40:13 +0000 UTC]
blalalalalalala I LOVE TANGLED.
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MadiMutt [2011-05-04 02:07:03 +0000 UTC]
I pretty much adore this. i looove rapunzel with short hair
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FlashakaViolet [2011-04-29 19:57:19 +0000 UTC]
So really beautiful *__*
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