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Published: 2007-06-12 02:53:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 2465; Favourites: 61; Downloads: 21
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About: How you can feel so numb inside, and feel lonely inside.DeviantArt Photographer: LiL-CaRzY-BiZzO
Deviation Entitled: Kili's Broken Heart Located Here: [link]
Her Gallery: [link]
Song Inspiration:
"Comfortably Numb" by Pink Floyd
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Comments: 60
Thank you so much, I have already started to heal but there is still resentment but I am trying to not dwell on it, now that I am finally on my own and have some peace.
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Thanks for writing this. I wish I could show this to my husband, soon to be my ex. But I no longer care.
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I hear ya, it is who I wrote it about was mine. It was the only way I could get my emotions out in a very painful marriage of 24 years that was full of negativity.
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Life gets better though, just keep your head up
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Yep my life is getting much better after all the "muck"
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I know this all to well.Hope serenity finds you soon
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Thank you, I hope so too
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Cuts like a knife..
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Thank you babe, that feeling is unbearable. I am surprised I didn't break in half or have a breakdown.
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Ohh i knew this one. For years feel this way. But now different
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Yep
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Yes it sure does
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Ohh thank you Michelle
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It was alot of pain being with someone I didn't love anymore and just going through the motions. And over the years all the wear and tear just makes you feel so numb.
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i understand this....so well.
thank you for giving me the link.
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This one has really hit home for me. It is what I am going through now. I am in a bad situation and it is taking an emotional toll on me.
You are an excellent writer. I can tell that it really comes from your soul and portrays a strong emotional feel for all who reads your amazing poems.
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It is the easiest way to write when you look inside your soul and heart especially when it is hurting. There are so many who have been their before.
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This is very poignant and puts its emotion across very clearly. I love the line "I want to feel a pulse in my body."
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Thank you so much 
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This is so sad and heart breaking! I hope that there will soon be a light at the end of the tunnel and that happiness shines your way because you deserve it so much!
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Thank you I hope so too, I am working on it
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wow im sorry this is happening to you. i'll pray for you. i hope things get better for you
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Thank you sweetie xoxo
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aww...its so sad....i hope this isn't happening to you hun
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It is sweetheart, and a counselor who deals with domestic abuse (emotional, physical, mental) told me to write about my feelings, and I have already gotten about 20 notes so far of other women that can relate to my sadder poems. But I am working on getting my life in a happier place, hopefully with love and happiness in the not too far future I hope.
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So many things you say in the verse are things I have said in the last several years... in a strange way, when I moved a few miles away early this year, things have improved but that is not often the case. In line with the rest of my life, it is really a strange overall situation.
May your happiness increase and your problems be successfully surmountable.
>Rich
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Thank you for reading my poem and your comments, I can relate.
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I have felt like that and went through the same awful moments it seems reading your work is like seeing my past a mirror as it were. Very well written as always.
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I am working on a new piece called Destiny, so hopefully i get that done soon
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your words leave heartbreak all over the page - and the image you picked matches and compliments the "blue" feeling. hope things get better
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Yep 
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I know sweetie,
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It's been unbelievably nice. I hope that your turns around too.
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