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Vivid-Funk — Rythm n Bullets Prologue Pg 1
Published: 2010-09-16 01:28:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 1831; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 7
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Our Main character, Raphael, starts off our wonderful journey into his world with him in the middle of sneaking into a desert compound. One of many tactical assassination missions... it kind of brings crude humor into what is, in reality, a gruesome and miserable life to live. Page 2 comming soon!Related content
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Personally, I like blam as a gunshot sound effect, but that's just me. The perspective, movement, and poses are well done here. The only thing I'd watch out for is shading; just remember where your light-source is, it can help set the mood even better. That's pretty much it. Sick stuff!
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I feel you on the gun shot deal. Most Japanise go with caligraphy lettering so when its in english its a "Pa" or "BM". I gotta keep it american on that part. I actually am adding a page before this one thats gonna show the entire compound and how the guy on the ground dies. I just wanted to get to the action fast! You are right. The little things count big time if you want to appeal to a huge audiance. Thanks for your honesty!
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Great attention to detail here....Its very well done...
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Thanks! I aim to please! I will put up my next page in 3 days.
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Thanks! I just put up page 2. Im kinda on a roll!! You may as well put me on your watch! Im gonna try to be the top marquee performer of you experience on here.
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Thanks! I will have the next one up next week!! Glad you dig it!
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Thats dope.Looks like u starting off where u left off.Keep it coming!
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So you aint at work today?
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Im bumping all your albums today. EastSideUp is my fave still. That..."Take your heart out your bleeding chest/take your..ahem..and beat it next" Hahahahaaaa!
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lol Its a good thing u censored urself/me.Those words arent for everyone to see/hear.lol
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Indeed!! Hahahahahhaa!! Classic tho!
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I went on and put page 2 up!
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Thats what up cuz.Ima checc it out.
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Glad you like it. Im gonna do like 5 pages of these before I put the actual book on here. Shit gets deeper once he enters the compound.
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good man can't wait to continue reading!
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Any action scene suggestions?
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hmmm maybe you can have a grenade fight lol
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Ok. I will draw it! Wilder the better.
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Thats whats up man! Add some RPG action just for kicks!
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Damn! Thats actually on the next page! Hahahaha!
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