Comments: 13
BlueSpartanOfVGC [2008-08-30 02:24:05 +0000 UTC]
This was certainly well written. Nice, fluid read.
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CynicalRomantic [2007-01-28 23:14:56 +0000 UTC]
I love this piece so much. You said it was so like the one I wrote, and I agree. The last line, about catching lightening bugs, was something me and the boy in my poem did when we were little. Totally identify.
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Viscious-Speed [2006-08-17 22:29:18 +0000 UTC]
It's beautiful. I love the lines :
"...but I tell you now
that we chased more than wildlife in those days
we chased—no, we caught—memories..."
Amd yes i agree with the 1st commentor, the ending is brilliant.
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SSEJBAT In reply to vix0r [2006-06-07 09:10:28 +0000 UTC]
anytime!
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