Comments: 17
Anniquake [2019-11-06 11:00:08 +0000 UTC]
my gosh, you just started digital stuff like not that long ago, and you're already better than me! \o-o/
Amazing job, dude.
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gdpr-27577555 [2019-11-04 12:41:19 +0000 UTC]
I just hope they didn't catch cold afterwards...
I actually thought this was Kota rather than Mark, if only because of the very young look compared to Mark's mature, masculine appearance. But I think I know what you were going for here, to show him in a vulnerable state, a low point in his life?
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gdpr-27577555 In reply to VulproFox [2019-11-05 09:48:51 +0000 UTC]
Either way, if mom had been around she would have had a fit with the both of them. x D
You can reinterpret it as a young version of Mark[?]
That should help us visualize the scene better. I know good writing is not easy, nor does it come in the first or second draft. Take your time, maybe get critique from your brother, rethink and redo until it's just write. *I did a pun*
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VulproFox In reply to TEK427 [2019-11-04 16:15:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank you ! I worked pretty hard for this lol
I love seeing bright light on a subject when the background is dark :3
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whiskeypawes [2019-11-01 23:16:11 +0000 UTC]
this looks really good!
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