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Mobian-Storyteller [2014-01-23 03:03:15 +0000 UTC]

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Juan you've done pretty well here and the story is getting better and better and more interesting which i was when i saw the start of the story.
The colors and characters look their best as they should which is what you do best.
This is probably the best of showing Gumball's classic trait of stupidity too as well the fact that cats always land on their feet which adds more humor.
The detail on the characters are another highlight they look very realistic.
And that's my opinion on this so great job Juan and good luck with the rest of the story

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Oatmeallemonparty [2019-08-11 06:47:06 +0000 UTC]

And now we are jumping out of the Fortnite bus.

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skulltronprime969 [2019-04-04 03:24:42 +0000 UTC]

WHAT!? THAT'S IT!? IT CAN'T BE IT!?

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DesmondJr [2017-08-29 02:14:39 +0000 UTC]

Keep it comin'

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DoubleM01 [2017-02-05 22:55:41 +0000 UTC]

This story is still on going right?
If it is then I can't wait for the next chapter

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Ponythe13th [2016-11-20 04:55:52 +0000 UTC]

This may not be seen but I was wondering if this will be continued?

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Hauti [2015-12-22 16:22:12 +0000 UTC]

Keep going!!

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Wait0wat [2015-11-06 14:41:24 +0000 UTC]

The art has improved since last page. P.s. - keep it up, I can't wait to read the whole thing is finished

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IceMountainDragon505 [2015-10-07 21:47:36 +0000 UTC]

This is Amazing!! XD

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Asweetdarkheart [2015-10-01 04:22:52 +0000 UTC]

PLEASE! Hurry and make another page!!💛

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kitten5005 [2015-06-14 20:32:03 +0000 UTC]

   cool drawing I hope you continue the story, please

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Kamihas [2015-01-19 12:18:11 +0000 UTC]

Hallo, my English is bad (I'm from german) but i cant  wait I will read the next page from this Comic Pls make more

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UpgraderIsAwesome [2014-10-10 12:30:21 +0000 UTC]

Please Continue The Comic It's Awesome And I Can't Wait The Other Part.

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whatactuallyisthis [2014-09-01 00:09:55 +0000 UTC]

Hey WaniRamirez, when r u gonna uploud the page numbr. 8?

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serperiorsergi [2014-08-29 04:44:37 +0000 UTC]

Next page?

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crazzytony [2014-07-03 20:47:43 +0000 UTC]

This is good when is the next page?

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Dragonrusher21 [2014-03-30 21:53:04 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE THIS

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Mattwurm99 [2014-03-16 19:16:30 +0000 UTC]

When will the next page come????

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sergioflipwarp [2014-02-08 05:34:59 +0000 UTC]

gumball: thats a myth made up by dogs :3

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Supermichy09 [2014-02-03 03:46:27 +0000 UTC]

Jesus dude how do you get your pictures so nice and clear, Nice drawing by the way WR great job! 

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Mattwurm99 [2014-01-30 02:25:01 +0000 UTC]

will you still do my request

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Supermichy09 [2014-01-28 02:30:19 +0000 UTC]

Dude I have no idea but your amazing! with your drawings

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Supermichy09 [2014-01-28 02:28:10 +0000 UTC]

freaking awesome!

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gumballcariedarwin [2014-01-25 23:32:56 +0000 UTC]

sweet!!!

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jittegameking [2014-01-24 13:33:36 +0000 UTC]

Wow, It's been so long! I can't remember anything!!!

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Toaoflight3690 [2014-01-24 03:50:59 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow.  When was the last time you worked on this fan fiction?

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CNSH-Society [2014-01-23 20:47:22 +0000 UTC]

"I thought cats are supposed to land on their feet when they fall."
No, thats not true, that just a rummor spread by dogs!

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Sonic767 [2014-01-23 18:33:17 +0000 UTC]

OH MAN I'M EXCITED.

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Sketchious [2014-01-23 14:03:06 +0000 UTC]

"Cats landing on their feet" It's just rumors spread by dogs!

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