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CaraidArt [2012-01-16 00:38:39 +0000 UTC]
Hey there, Lhune here from #SeriousArtists !
First and foremost I would like to know if you used a reference for this. Faces are very tricky, and even the best artists out there resort to references if they aren't too sure. There are a lot of mistakes in this portrait that could be fixed if you studied a real face, or if you studied it more intently if you already did. I understand that you've stylized some aspects of the face intentionally, but if your base knowledge isn't strong enough, your stylization will come off wrong and look like a simple mistake rather than an intentional design aspect.
Value wise the face is quite good, although it could do with some lighter lights and darker darks here and there to bring it more to life. If you're unsure what I'm talking about I'm willing to give you a paintover, though I've learned that some artists are quite sensitive about others painting over their works, so I figured I'd ask first.
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Warmics In reply to CaraidArt [2012-01-16 07:22:28 +0000 UTC]
Hi, I did not use a reference, I was just painting randomly and slowly shaped it into being. I appreciate the feedback though, I realize there's plenty of room for improvement ^^. Feel free to paint over. Thanks again!
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Warmics In reply to CaraidArt [2012-01-20 06:19:06 +0000 UTC]
That looks wonderful, thank you a lot for the time. Very appreciated ^^
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