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-> NEXT OH GOSH SEVEN DAYS.
I had a major personal crisis during that time, so please forgive me for being slightly late. But it's not really late, being only seven days, so whatever.
Updates will hopefully not continue to be this slow. :V I kinda don't want to take too long.
As for the content… gee, just… just… just… it's FILLER.
Lots of filler, filler, filler.
And background.
Did I mention the backgrounds here were kinda ANNOYING?
But ohwell.
Oh well.
I'm done.
I'm done, and that's ALLES WAS ZÄHLT.
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Comments: 111
i lvoe so much the frist panel!
i hope the pokémon doesnt want willingly to die starving -.-''
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I must say this is AMAZING 
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No disrespect, but the pink and purple shirts are kind of sexist.
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o.O Why?
A shirt doesn't make anything sexist. I have a lot of non-gender-conformative things in my locke, I'd like to say, and neither pink nor purple are exclusive to females. Bianca likes pink, but so does Burgh.
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I don't know I just hate how people automatically think girls like pink and all that girly stuff, 'ya know?
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Well, that's really not true for my story o.o I mean, Bianca likes pink, but so does Burgh, and Lauren would never wear pink. I mean, it's not sexism to say some girls like pink, because some girls do. Now, if ALL girls just wore pink and pastel colours and were kawaii and stuff, yeah, I agree, that would be kinda sexist, but I like to think I have a variety of characters? Bianca happens to like pink and be very girlish sometimes, but compare that to all the other girl characters (White, Lauren, Evera, Elesa...) and you see it's not something I do for everyone. And saying that girls can't like pink because it's a stereotype is sexist in itself. Anyone can like pink.
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I'm not saying girls can't like pink i'm saying it's rude to assume girls like pink.
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I know. And yes, I agree. I just don't see it here o_ö"
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Definitely not "filler," IMO, since there's plenty of characterization here. Definitely worth continuing to read, because not only is the plot very well-thought-out, but also the art has become very beautiful over time. Great job with Nimbasa City, it looks absolutely amazing!
The part with Veera is rather subtle, but paying attention to it really makes me think about how this whole world seems to be full of Catch-22's. The Pokémon get seriously injured in battle, and they have to stay out of their Poké Balls for an extended time. They stay out of their Poké Balls for an extended time, and their comprehension and obedience of their trainers' commands decline. Their comprehension and obedience decline, and an otherwise easy battle can get much harder. The battles become much harder, and they also become much deadlier. It just seems like every little thing adds up to a major losing struggle, which makes the rules of the universe both tragic and thought-provoking. But I suppose that's the beauty of the way it's written— no shortage in surprises that really make you think.
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I don't see this as filler, filler has no bearing on the plot, your showing how White's relations with her mother are going, as well as the injury to her pokemon
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Quite a while spent in Castelia...but now we move on to more plot...or filler
...and I just noticed that Cheren looks like a girl... o.o
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Well, this is more filler than plot, but well, it's necessary. C:
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Awesome! 
Also, this is probably rude of me to ask, and you don't have to answer if you don't want to, but... are you okay? D: What with the major personal crisis?
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I'm okay ;w; I feel much better now, thank you!
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Was already done in 50 :V
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I know... I realized that. XD sorry I don't know what wrong with me SO MANY PAGES GURL asdfjkl;
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Filler, filler, filler :V
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YAY WE FINALLY LEFT CASTELIA!! We're on the road to Nimbasa Citeeeee
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Abslutely :V But hey, I'm quite proud of it now.
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Oh wow, your Nimbasa is beautiful. It actually looks like the size of a city. I'm super impressed.
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Wait... They're at the next city!? IT'S A SIGN OF THE APOCALYPSE!
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White and Cherin seems to be starting their sentences with "aah" a lot in this scene, as if they need a while to process Bianca was said. I don't think they are really paying much attention to what shes's saying at the moment. Poor girl doesn't seem to realize though, hehe.
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I love the art of Nimbasa in that last panel. 
I went on a rampage this weekend and did pretty much nothing but play Black Version, so now I actually know how the plot goes rather than relying on your Nuzlocke. XD
If you don't mind my asking, why did this submit twice?
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Haha :V Yes, I just pulled the ferris wheel scene to the front, yay.
And yay for knowing the original plot. Which, mind you, will be severely different from this point in time… Haha…
Erm, the double submit was a mistake u_u" Techology…
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Yeah, I kinda realized that. Also because you said that you were heavily modifying the in-game plot. But will White still battle the Gym leaders and the Elite Four?
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A quick spot: Cheren's hand switched sides in panel 18. Other than that I see nothing wrong here! And I wouldn't call it filler--it's more like a transitional chapter where the characters' new opinions about the world are shown. Cheren is actually keeping a Pokemon outside its Pokeball (and I wonder what he's reading?), Bianca isn't up in a tizzy about the welfare of Pokemon, White no longer trusts her friends enough to tell them what happened and is becoming a little awkward around them, and Veera is being despondent, which may or may not affect how Champ views White.
Nimbasa City also turned out really nice. It's a little gray, but then again this comic is all about *the gray.* XD If you don't want it to turn into another Castelia, I'd suggest giving it more color. (flashing lights, street banners, graffiti, advertisements, buses, etc) And don't worry about your personal crisis making you "late!" You can take all the time you need. Seven days is nothing. :3
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Haha, thank you for your comments, always! xD
Well, my Locke is a lot of "filler", depends on how you think of it, really :V I wish I had more action, but it's really not my style… u_u
Also, yeah, I'll probably make Nimbasa a bit more colourful INSIDE :V
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B-But... there is a lot of action! Bloody battles, forcing releases, knife swipes, court cases, punches, Naub, and drama everywhere you look! Your Locke is full of action, just in an intellectual sense of the word. :3
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xD ahaha, thank you! *cuddles*
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Hmm whats up with all the doubles in the description??
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Eh, I dunno. Dunno, whatever you think it is, it's probably coincidence. Whatever. I think you're just seeing a coincidence there :V
/brick'd
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I suppose i mean i probably only noticed cause i double punctuate..
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OH JOY ANOTHER CITY BESIDE A SIGNIFICANT SOURCE OF WATER. xD
I'm really liking this design, though. It's so ... realistic. Nimbasa is an interesting city. c:
ALSO VEERA IS A LIL DIVA ALREADY.
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Haha, thank you ;w;
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My favorite city! This page may have been filler, but its interesting filler. Veera seems resentful(understandably), Cheren's Growlithe is out of his Pokeball, Bianca seems a bit less concerned with Pokemon's welfare... I like it. :3
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"seven days" "major personal crisis" "forgive me" "late"
Apart from this not being late at all (as I'm sure you've been told thousands of times already), it's completely understandable to take a break if real life is getting in the way. 
Anyhow. On the subject of this page. Scenery change! I find it interesting how Cheren's keeping his Growlithe out of its Poke Ball, and that Veera seems to be somewhat resentful, and... actually, everything about this page is interesting. It always is.
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Ahhh, but I HATE being slower :/ You can't measure me by other people's standards! xD I ususally update more than once every seven days, Five days is akin to borderline already, seven is horribly late :V
But true - I don't need to apologise to you, only to myself. And gee, as if I could work any slower anyway.
Anyway, glad it's interesting despite it being mostly filler.
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