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Published: 2012-11-22 21:39:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 16365; Favourites: 119; Downloads: 104
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-> NEXT … Hell yes. *throws fist in the air* Another fairly regular-paced update. :3 I'm getting back into the groove, I believe.
As for the page, it's mostly self-explanatory. *yawn*
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OH EMGEE I SHIP THEM SO HARDCORE. :iconuberfanplz: If there isn't a user like that, make one.
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Ugh...
I still don't like ANY of the romance aspects here. Not yet at least. I think all seem underdeveloped and specially this one, very corny and fake.
Whatever, I like everything else in this story.
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Oops that last comment was suppose to be at chapter 88
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I read this till four am (started sometime around noon), fell asleep, woke up and finished it first thing. This is-too amazing for words, I hope you never stop creating stories like this, you have a real talent. I absolutely love all the detail you put in it. The character building is astounding; at one point I had to take a step back as it dawned on my OH-OH WOW this has plot and foundation! The characters, the ideas, the reality! I'm one of those people whose knows battling is vicious and not cute or fun but could never think of a Pokémon as a tool or a creature without feeling. The dispenser! Chili! Oh Arceus! What was that! Pokémon can't just-but they die-so they hav-but No that so AHhh! T_T. The people! It’s just how they were raised (though there was a note Chilli was worse than some) but of course there is doubt amongst some. Everything makes sense everything is put together so nicely! This is really well thought out! I adore that you have given the grunts personality, humanity and background. In fact you make everyone so Human it's incredible! I am ecstatic you put in the effort to actually show Cheren and Bianca's battles as well as the character's actually lives to an extent. For instance Grimsley, I myself would have never thought of his life further than The League but You have given him so much more! Love it! Love it when you expand parts like that, it happens with the grunts (as mentioned) too, minor little people that suddenly have lives!, People that you just squashed in the game and are now reading about and routing for and hoping, praying that they make it out okay. Alder how dare you black mail Grimsley like that! Caitlin I knew there was a reason why I found you scary. Shauntal that friendship just makes sense! I think all the relationships are wonderfully done. Once again, a nice little touch of humanity to make us realize hey these people have lives and feelings too they don't just exist for training, rebelling, plot furthering or league qualms. I think you have put a very nice spin on the Gym Leaders and League officials. And overall I am most impressed by how well the story explains itself and how human you keep everyone. Summing up I don’t have much negative to say about this. Potions kill Pokémon, Pokeballs brainwash them and you can now capture people…wow just wow, in a good way. Most of the time I would be like What? @_@ but no you make it all believable. All so believable I want to cry because it’s just that beautiful. I think all the characters are just so unbelievably well-built (Nice spin on Bianca finally someone how hasn’t made her a ditz *thumbs up* Also it’s really neat how you make the trio actually together at times) and the plot and logic as just out of this world in radical ideas and undeniable foundation. I only wish the Pokémon received more coverage so I could become more attached to them. Poor Munna. I am quite anxious to see the next chapter and if you ever want a serious review or raw option of how things are going I will Always give you my honest truth, no glossing over just fact. I don’t want to infringe too much on your time so I won’t add a review of this particular chapter…unless you want one? Thank you for the time you spend making me amazed as well as the effort you put in. Also thank You for taking the time to read my message sorry it is so lengthy and sometimes repetitive.
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Asdfh I love long comments like this.
I am so happy that you like it and, gosh, long comments don't bother me at all! :'D So never hesitate! Thank you very much, and if you do happen to have any critique in particular, I'd be grateful to hear it.
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Hmmm wow well it's really long so If yo want me to go back and review every page I will but it will take awhile just as an overview of everything, forgive me if this is redundant to to my comment but-I really like the way you handle the characters. I love the development of minors like the grunts,gym leaders and League staff.(I can detail this comment if you like.) I appriacte your radical takes on the Unova world.(Can also detail this with exsamples once again only if you want my opion for the most part what you write jsut seems to click and make sense in my mind). You exsplain the world really well despite all these ideas. Once again the ONLY thing I request for improvement in is the pokemon coverage, I really wish there was more, just so I culd get more attached and/or understand them better. Also I love your art, no complaints there. it's incredible to compare your first and last comic segments though the first was quite well done you last has jsut bloomed. Really nice art style.
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Oh, as far as pokemon coverage goes, that will definitely improve I think. I know, I said that before, and well, the comic never really will be all about pokemon, but... there will be more. There is a reason why we haven't gotten much pokemon coverage and we will see more of the reasoning etc.
If you'd like to, I'd really, really appreciate long comments for each page, but I don't want to waste your time doing that - if you want to, you can comment on every couple pages summarising a short section. If you don't feel like it, that's fine too. C: Just know that I very much love and enjoy all sorts of comment, so you don't need to worry about how short or long they get~
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Okay well this week I am going to be REALLY REALLY busy but afterwards I will reread you comic from ground one and give you my thoughts on it. I can't promise the comments will be huge(Thugh I will try and make them large and thoughtful) and yes it will take AWHILE but I will eventually have it done. Also from here on out every new padge I will comment on. Is that good enough? ^_^
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cx that's perfectly fine! Take your time!
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Aww... this scene actually had more impact than the Bianca/Elesa one, probably because it has a much more solid grounding.
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It's like, a Nuzlocke. But with fine character building, adult themes, and an honestly intriguing plot. Just read up to this point as well, and I LOVE IT. Brilliant stuff, 'd be sure to check for updates regularly. [:
*Hits refresh.*
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<3 Thank you!
I update fairly regularly, so hopefully I can keep you entertained!
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I just found and read all this comic today. I am so interested I cannot stop, except there is no next page. Ahhh I am dying. Just kidding. I will just re-read until more is at the end. :3 Your art and storytelling is super good. I am inspired.
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;w; Thank you!
Fortunately for you, I update fairly regularly, so you won't be dying that soon (;
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Super happy face! I look forward to it. Oh, can I um... use the idea of the trainer card that is tracked and like credit card in one of my comics? I will credit the inspiration to you :3
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Holy hell. Wass, looking back at when this Nuzlocke first started, you've improved so much. I forgot deviantart was a thing until about three days ago, and while sorting through my inbox, I finally get to your stuff. Your hair is beautiful, your faces, proportions, your Pokemon are amazing. I'm just stunned by how all this improvement just slipped under my nose. I'm ashamed I didn't come back sooner! I'm still in awe of how beautifully drawn your hair is. Compared to when you first started, you've gotten so much better, at little things, and at big things. You were great not-so-long-ago (what, a year? Two?) but you just improve in leaps and bounds, and I haven't said a word about the story yet. I kinda just want to sit here and admire the colors you're always paying attention to, all the little details you put into it. Seems like you pay attention to everything. Posture, little details in the background, expression (your expressions make me feel like a robot). Not to mention you've been uploading regularly! Jeez Wass. You should be proud of everything you produce, because you're really damned good. And I love how the story is progressing and am hungry for more updates. *gnaws sleeve waiting*
/end rant
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Holy hell. 
Thank you very much! <3 I will totally continue to make updates, so do come back!
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Oh trust me, I wouldn't miss the next update for the world. <3
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*sucks in Air* D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Speed Updates, YAY!
And aww finally ONE Happy End (still if it's only for now <3) I'm curious what N will tell and how the story develops in the future.... <3
I just love your story 
I also think that your drawings improved a lot over the chapters :3 The shading and the backgrounds are getting smoother and better
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If we would've been following Lauren the whole time and not knowing anything about White, she would fit as a double agent xD
I mean, she is shown as a "anti-Team-Plasma" first, her best friend is in direct contact with the League, Lauren thinks she is being tracked and then White appeared out of nowhere to save them.
And to give her a good cover reason, they kill someone,maybe the old double agent....
that would make for a great Film Noir style story.
just saying
a really interesting update
keep up the good work
(sorry if my comment makes no sense, I am really tired)
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Well, no, we see Lauren at Wellspring Cave first. xD But... yeah, I guess it would still make sense and be intresting, lol.
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Aaaawwwww Lauren and David are just really cute ;v;
I also just really love this comic, it's so good<3
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I have been following the series for a while but only now I could comment.
The already nice plot of BW got even better in your nuzlocke series. I simply love the depthness you had to picture the "mechanics" of Unova and Pokemon, the ethical/social conflicts are also extremely interesting and verisimilar. And last, but not least, the art: Your pokemon redesigns are awesome, they have (in my opinion) a nice degree of realism, not being too organical, nor too "drawn".
All in all, this is an awesome piece of work, and i hope to see it to the end.
I also made a Vanilluxe redesign based in your Vanillite one, hope you like it.
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Oh dear things are getting good. League's pretty high tech in your world I like it. I guess they are FBI/CIA/Homeland security all rolled into one?
Lauren and David the bearded man (I mean seriously his sideburn beard combo is his most distinctive feature) make a pretty good couple, with the necessary ups and downs.
And now N is walking in with a cape like a boss, preparing a big speech. I wonder how that's going to go?
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Wow.
Just...wow.
I read this entire comic, start to this page, in the span of several hours. I've refrained from commenting on previous pages, but now that I'm caught up, I have to say...adkhfsdjkhf. I love this comic. And I usually hate fanfiction and the like. But your world...the characters you have created (yes, Nintendo/GameFreak may have come up with the original characters, but by now you've definitely made them your own)...so amazing. I'm awed and very intrigued by your serious, in-depth reworking of the Pokemon world, and the amount of detail you put into this.
I love everything about this comic so far, and hope to keep reading
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Haha, I'm glad you enjoy the comic <3 Hope you continue to!
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Okay finally caught up! That was a sweet moment between David and Lauren~ I wonder what N has to say..
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Baaaawwww I'm not usually a fan of lovey-dovey stuff or anything like that, but these two just make my heart melts! Good job!
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Sooooo much love and sweetness in this! I've never seen a storyline with this much development of the "villains" of the universe. I love how you've depicted Team Plasma. It's just awesome.
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Haha, yes... it was my intention to do a different take on Team Plasma ^^
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May I just say that if your character decided to join TP, then I would love this comic even more!!!
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Aww, ich mag kitschige Versöhnungen!
Also, was hat N jetzt wohl zu sagen? Der Innenraum sieht ein bisschen wie ne Kirche aus. Auf der anderen Seite sagt G-Cis im Spiel ja auch immer "Friede sei mit euch" und so was. XD
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Lauren is the definition of drama llama... :u
J/k...another awesome page.
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Lauren gets in trouble, is rash and yells at people… that's totally calm and composed and nice! XD
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I love the way you draw hair. It's so soft and fluffy looking. Lauren and David are so cute together, although half the time it looks like she's ready to bite his head off xD
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She is a bit… tough on him, I guess. But that's why he likes her 8D
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