HOME | DD
Waterdrain — AATR Pheebs ref sheet
Published: 2018-01-18 19:45:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 934; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description
Doodle: waterdrain.deviantart.com/art/…Joan: waterdrain.deviantart.com/art/…
Let me know if you have any questions or need more info
Related content
Comments: 6
MORE EDITS because when I start a project, I just keep going. XD Also please don't get discouraged! I'm very thorough, and hopefully these will help you improve for next time!
Under Main Bio:
- “freash” should be “fresh”
- “that’s still trying” should be “who’s still trying”
- “esecape” should be “escape”
- “and the rest of her life started” is probably meant to say “and GET the rest of her life started”
Under LIKES:
- “spicey” should be “spicy”
- “beleive” should be “believe”
- ( a gulity pleasure) should be (a guilty pleasure) (you have an extra space after the first parenthesis)
- “they can be” should be “she can be” (you use she throughout most of this bio)
Under DISLIKES:
- “all nighter” should be hyphenated: “all-nighter”
- “themselves” should be “herself”
- “exseperince” should be “experience”
Under PERSONALITY:
- “indecive” should be “indecisive”
- Put a space between “sweet side” and “(that’s what people tell her)”, and another space between “tell her)” and “she’s”
- “She’s” shouldn’t be capitalized here, make it “she’s fairly domestic”
- Also “demestic” should be “domestic”
- “People-pleaser” should be hyphenated.
- “When comes” should be “When it comes”
- “Streagth” should be “strength” and have a comma right after it.
- “Yellow belts” should be “Yellow belt’s” (apostrophe)
- “Defence” should be “defense”
- “experince” should be “experience”
- “Near-sighted” should be hyphenated.
- “Over thinker” should be one word, “overthinker” and there should be a comma right after it.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Yeah, I got terribly sick after spending whole night partying barefeet.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Oh man really? That must have been terrible getting sick the day after. Sorry that happened to you ;u;
I used to run around barefoot a lot when I was a kid. I almost hated wearing shoes. xD
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
To be true, barefeet characters looks cool )
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I definitely agree, barefoot characters are the best!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
OHHHHH did she summon Doodle by accident when a drip fell out of her mug? Ha nice! I wonder what happens if she dumps out the entire thing.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0