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Published: 2005-05-12 04:43:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 97; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description I walk into the school,
And start to look around.
As i scan the faces,
I can't help but frown

There's the group of pretty girls,
slim, tall, and chic.
And there are all the upbeat people,
Who are never shy or meek.

ANd then there are the confident ones,
who love the way they are.
And there are also the wealthy ones,
who have much more by far.

And I wonder where I fit in,
where's my place in the pack?
And then a spot stands out to me,
The lone chair in the back.
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Comments: 11

iamshynie [2005-06-11 11:13:15 +0000 UTC]

i think i cried...its too close...

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wcjhwriter90 In reply to iamshynie [2005-06-25 06:24:21 +0000 UTC]

thanx. alot of my friends said that.

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WitchMithras [2005-06-07 06:16:55 +0000 UTC]

close enough to home.. only instead of the lone chair i walked out the lone door.

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tatlntael [2005-05-23 14:02:24 +0000 UTC]

I love this poem, short as it is becuase this is EXACTLY EXACTLY how I feel. You nailed it. I wish no one ever had to feel this way.

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wcjhwriter90 In reply to tatlntael [2005-05-24 02:28:02 +0000 UTC]

i know how u feel, but in highschool that is how everyone feels

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Breaking-the-habit [2005-05-13 02:31:11 +0000 UTC]

thats very good, and sometimes if u dont fit in, thats also a good thing, it shows that ur an independent thinker

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wcjhwriter90 In reply to Breaking-the-habit [2005-05-14 20:08:00 +0000 UTC]

you obviously didn't get the message. i felt, when i wrote it, like an outcast with no one to confide in. it wasn't a good thing. i was hurting.

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Breaking-the-habit In reply to wcjhwriter90 [2005-05-16 01:34:45 +0000 UTC]

well, im use to being and outcast, and getting hurt, srry

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wcjhwriter90 In reply to Breaking-the-habit [2005-05-16 03:43:34 +0000 UTC]

r u trying to say something? r u saying that I of all ppl hurt u? cause if u think u didnt hurt me, think again.

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ActrizAnna [2005-05-12 04:47:05 +0000 UTC]

"the lone chair in the back"
i love the end of this, the whole thing is good, but the end is so sad and well written. great work
please look at my gallery i love to have talented writers comment!!

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wcjhwriter90 In reply to ActrizAnna [2005-05-12 05:03:01 +0000 UTC]

aww, thank you so much, that was so sweet. i think its awsome that you think i am a talented writer, thats what i want to do for my career, so that means so much to me, thank you.

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