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TryforFirstTy [2017-06-01 20:19:38 +0000 UTC]
Since it's dawned on me i haven't given you much critique and if it would be fine with you for me to do so...
Your lineart's gotten much cleaner, and your coloring and color palette is consistent! Very good job, on the improvement, lad! However, the shading is a bit funky since it's appearing on both sides of her body, which makes it hard to discern the light source; it would also be good to try shading her armor as well!
Returning to the lineart, it is still just a bit shaky and slightly unrefined looking. I would suggest trying to even them out more and maybe sharpening the edges to make them appear more crisp.
Overall, you've certainly improved from where you began, but do keep working hard! Your art is coming along wonderfully, chap!
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werelightshine In reply to TryforFirstTy [2017-06-02 00:39:19 +0000 UTC]
Thank you sir.
But for the reasons this could be better: All my digital art is done on my IPod. And The stylus i have sucks so i use my thumb. And the shading... You're right I could've done better.
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TryforFirstTy In reply to werelightshine [2017-06-03 15:48:37 +0000 UTC]
Oof yeesh not the best equipment, i agree. Good for what you have, though! Shading's a bitch as well anyways
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God-Money [2017-06-01 01:10:50 +0000 UTC]
I know who the second faggot on the list is
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werelightshine In reply to God-Money [2017-06-01 04:56:06 +0000 UTC]
If you think it's you..... I'm sorry. You didn't inspire me to improve my art.
You did inspire me to attempt to help others improve their art.
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werelightshine In reply to God-Money [2017-06-01 04:58:57 +0000 UTC]
I know. ☹️🔫
But uhhh, your RP skills are good.
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werelightshine In reply to God-Money [2017-06-01 05:08:36 +0000 UTC]
But still. You're my friend. That's all that matters to me.
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werelightshine In reply to God-Money [2017-06-02 00:44:21 +0000 UTC]
No or yeah? (That's a neutral answer if I've ever seen one)
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