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WesleyRiot — Secret War Chapter 3 page 2
Published: 2009-05-11 22:22:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 1009; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 16
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chapterhooray! finally!
this page follows on from :iconpahgiz's (with whom I collaborated), which can be seen here: [link]
page 3 here: [link]
so erm, yeah, my wacom got busted before i managed to finish this. i used =kinkei 's to get the damn thing done.
I spent too much time trying to fiddle with the background and didnt make it too good.
oh aye, there's Zerkov, Stunboy and Plaid Wonder. There. in the background!
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Angel ©
Holly © Me
Zerkov ©
Stunboy ©
Plaid Wonder ©
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Wonderful characters, beautifully inked, and utterly brilliant facial expressions but oddly enough, I'm not sure I like it. Having a character with blue and purple hair, and a background which is blue and purple just seems odd. With such vibrant characters, it's difficult to make a suitable background. Maybe if you made the outline of the characters a thicker black (which is proved effective in panel 2).
Holly is a magnificent character in this who not only displays strength, but an element of innocence and a certain flippant naiveté and tomboy charm.
Angel adds a certain feminine glamour often seen in comic books today, but I suspect that she is best suited to be in black and white as the coloured effect may need some revising. That and her trousers. If she knew how enormous white trousers made her thighs, I'm sure she's switch to black. That said, she has a certain sharpness to her eyes which indicate that, despite her blonde disposition, she is not someone I'd like to cross.
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thanks for that dude
the blue/purple issue is a bit of a disaster, but I was a little tied by the fact that the sky in the intro chapter is that colour, so I tried to stick to the colours used in the intro pages by . i guess i could have mase sure she was set against a background in the panels, but time was an issue.
dude, dont criticise Angel's colour scheme, it's not mine! XD
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I quite like Angel's colour scheme. Problem is, she does look like she has fat thighs. Maybe using a bit of clever co-ordination might make 'em look more flattering, but it's like she's got the top of a super model and the bottom of a mother who shops at Londis.
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hang on. what? what are you looking at?
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hurm.
if that right leg looks big its ment to be the mass bunching up and compressing, whereas the other is extended and so thinner. it wasnt supposed to look FAT.
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And yet it does. Don't let a little thing like artistic integrity get in the way of drawing hot girls.
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and hot girls have skinny legs do they?? man you're so messed up XD
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It's true. It's in... THE BIBLE!
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great page love your style and character and the refernce to another fight was a very nice touch
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wicked page man. Really nice panels and dialogue. And cool tiny cameo of zerkov and stunboy! lol But it sets the scene and the time of the events nicely.
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yeah, i kind of hoped it would. i tried to sort of make it link in with what else is going on.... or give *Kostmeyer a headache, lol
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MAN...you got to note me when you BRING the AWESOME...What a cool tie into the STORY.
You are my hero!
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whoah! too much enthusiasm! it hurts!
hah thanks for the niceness dude
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My boy must mean a lot to Angel for her to go after him just like that. XD
A very well laid out page, and it looks amazing. Plus, you're being too hard on yourself concerning the backgrounds, I for one feel that they give enough depth to the panels. ^^
And good luck on getting your tablet fixed soon!
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thanks for the comments, sorry for the late reply!
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WOW!!!
It looks so awesome in colors!!
I hardly wait for that next page x)
I could write more but I'm writing this comment during the lesson....
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heheh, cheers for that!
naughty naughty XD
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Yeah.. xDD I guess I am little bit...
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Awesome page! Your art is always a treat. Looking forward to seeing more next chapter.
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aw what a nice thing to say lol
thanks a bunch but dont get too excited, it contains more bg fail!
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lol...backgrounds are evil but I think you're a bit too harsh on yourself.
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Great page - your characters look so stylish! I'm going to have to fix the next Chapter so you draw Vigil a lot!
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thanks bro, sorry i went tits up!
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No worries - I ran out of steam myself at the end - still have to draw the epilogue!
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when i figure out time travel, i will read the whole thing XD
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LOL! Yeah I know what you mean!
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