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whisperingshadowz17 — my feelings exactly
Published: 2009-12-04 21:53:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 97; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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let my glossy eyescapture your attention
for a moment
youll see into my soul
the damage done to my heart
my unhealthy mind
i have the smile
of an angel
my eyes the color
of the ocean
i move forward
with my
life every day
it gets harder
done the same way
every second gets
more unbearable
read my expression
feel my pain
you will never know
what its like to be me
block out everyone else
keeping to myself
i cant wait until
all of this is finally
over
the glossy eyes shed
their tears
streaking down frustrated
cheeks to penetrate the floor
because im not important enough
to inflict
anything on the world
that surrounds me
gone is my meaning
desolate is my thought
process
Don't bother trying
to reach beneath my surface
any further
I'm gone
because it's over
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Comments: 6
Really nice how the ending wrapped things up. It does jump around a lot but it turned out quite well anyways.
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my feelings were all over for this one 
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Really? Alright, I suppose I could try to whip something up. It may take me a bit, I still need to learn more about you.
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sounds good to mee
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Quite the ending you wrote, I love it. Yeah, parts of it seem a little random with hardly any transition, but it works out fine.
It shows true meaning, and that is what I enjoy about your work.
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