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Oh noooo someone's at the shallow end of the gene pool...
Yes, Ahadi's weakness is a genetic one, and not from his mother's side.
Oh look, little Meseh! 

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A pesar de su felicidad, el corazón de Nasibu se estremecía con pesar. Los dos cachorros crecían notablemente diferente. Ahadi no era tan activo ni sano como su hermana. Callado e inmóvil, sus costillas eran fácilmente visibles bajo la piel.

El cachorro que Nasibu cuidó mientras vagaba, Meseh, estaba al tanto de la debilidad de Ahadi. Siempre estaba junto a ellos y atento a sus progresos.

Agana abrió los ojos a su debido momento y empezó a jugar activamente.

Ahadi no lo hizo. Apenas se movía ni tampoco comía lo suficiente. Descorazonada, Nasibu lo mantenía caliente y lo lamía continuamente para mantenerlo estimulado. Hasta que un día...

*bufido*


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The Lion King © Disney
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Comments: 43

Escritora2Aliasfox [2022-05-20 21:47:03 +0000 UTC]

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RedRebel5 [2022-05-09 02:23:37 +0000 UTC]

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TigresaDaina [2019-04-18 04:07:18 +0000 UTC]

awww su mamá preocupada.. =C

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NecroCC [2019-02-20 17:19:05 +0000 UTC]

aww un tierno bostezo owo
esos cachorros si que son tiernos nn

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Luna-DevilWorship [2019-02-20 15:38:20 +0000 UTC]

Anyone else see the hiss...? I hope both babies will end up ok

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Bellateda [2019-02-17 06:47:04 +0000 UTC]

He grew up as a strong large lion....

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Erenea2011 [2019-02-16 22:47:07 +0000 UTC]

Me lei las paginas,hasta que lei la descripcion.Almenos mi mal Ingles no estaba tan mal.

Me da la sensacion de que Uru y su hermano,seran dos bolas de pelo que se meteran en problemas seguidos.

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JuxieGamerElite105 [2019-02-16 05:12:59 +0000 UTC]

AHADI NOOO

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wolfra315 [2019-02-15 13:02:01 +0000 UTC]

im rooting for the little cubs

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Martyn-Arts [2019-02-15 03:17:40 +0000 UTC]

awwwwhhhh nooo.... hang in there lil cutie cub.

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Umbra0Ghost [2019-02-14 17:30:11 +0000 UTC]

don't chu do it, I know chu're gonna do it.. 

(I love your work btw! keep it up!!)

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Kaod-Mistress [2019-02-14 16:21:37 +0000 UTC]

This is a wonderful page, art-wise. However, the one box referring to Meseh has jumbled English. For starters, "taked" isn't a real word. It should read more like: "Although Nasibu had another cub to take care of..."

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fvhn In reply to Kaod-Mistress [2019-02-14 20:23:14 +0000 UTC]

Agreed, but I think the meaning (or at least the way I understood it) would be "Meseh, the cub Nasibu had taken care of while wandering, was also aware of Ahadi's weakness..."

WhiteKimya  
(btw this is the first time I'm seeing your comic and just this page is so emotional... ahhh good job!!!)

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Kaod-Mistress In reply to fvhn [2019-02-15 03:09:58 +0000 UTC]

Yes, that makes more sense actually.

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WhiteKimya In reply to fvhn [2019-02-14 20:56:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you both Kaod-Mistress fvhn , I didn't check twice (I used irregular verbs like this before )

And indeed, it's basically a brief explanation of Meseh's "origins" in a way since he appeared from nowhere: he arrives to the lands with the lioness that takes care of him all the way to their new home

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Kaod-Mistress In reply to WhiteKimya [2019-02-15 03:09:20 +0000 UTC]

Like they say, hakuna matata.  ^^

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TeamPokemonSpain [2019-02-14 15:07:00 +0000 UTC]

Me encanta como dibujas a los cachorros, en especial como has hecho notar las costillas a Ahadi. 10/10

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Tayarinne [2019-02-14 11:44:46 +0000 UTC]

Those cubs are so adorable! OuO  I love the third panel with Agana. x3

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Bellateda [2019-02-14 11:16:29 +0000 UTC]

Larger cubs usually push thee weak siblings away, maybe that's why Ahadi is so ill....

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Inkary [2019-02-14 08:35:17 +0000 UTC]

Dude, this is too heart-wrenching

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Cloudyfluffthedragon [2019-02-14 07:06:45 +0000 UTC]

Its allways the snake

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hannahelizabethh [2019-02-14 05:19:08 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic art
but that poor mother hope her male cub doesn’t die

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Lewont [2019-02-14 03:28:31 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Otra pagina! En la anterior pág ya me estaba preguntando donde esta Meseh? Me encanta como dibujas cachorros (Para mí siempre son un dolor de cabeza dibujarlos)Gran trabajo!

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WhiteKimya In reply to Lewont [2019-02-15 00:42:13 +0000 UTC]

Muchas gracias!!
Si, tenía que incorporarlo de alguna forma  
Aunque sí es complicado conseguir cachorros "coherentes" xD probaste de usar proporciones de "niño", que son las que suelen usarse con cachorros también? ¿Del tipo hocico pequeño, ojos y orejas grandes, mucha frente y cuerpos pequeños en comparación a la cabeza? las crías de ciervo en Bambi es otro buen ejemplo

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AccursedLore [2019-02-14 00:08:16 +0000 UTC]

That is a heckin' hissing and I don't like it.

What devastation are you going to thrust upon us?

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Zcat91819 [2019-02-13 23:12:41 +0000 UTC]

Meseh is keepin a visual 

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JYNFury14 [2019-02-13 22:02:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh no...

Why do I have the feeling that something might happen to Agana and not Ahadi?.  


Great page as always! I love how you draw the cubs, they're so adorable!    

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WhiteKimya In reply to JYNFury14 [2019-02-14 21:06:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!  
Noooo but I like Agana, she's so cute playing with his bro's tail    (???) 

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Emberguard In reply to JYNFury14 [2019-02-14 03:12:19 +0000 UTC]

Because traditionally Ahadi is the Father of Mufasa and Taka, and due to Ahadis weakness he's being kept close eye on by the mother

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MilmoTheArtGirl [2019-02-13 21:41:00 +0000 UTC]

NO PLEASE
IF THAT BABY DIES I WILL FREAKING CRY

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WhiteKimya In reply to MilmoTheArtGirl [2019-02-14 21:03:32 +0000 UTC]

Noooooouuuuuuuu the babies are precioussss

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MilmoTheArtGirl In reply to WhiteKimya [2019-02-14 21:07:13 +0000 UTC]

;-;
Imma still cry

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KuroiTsume2005 [2019-02-13 21:39:29 +0000 UTC]

Oh god... What is gonna happen '-"

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WhiteKimya In reply to KuroiTsume2005 [2019-02-14 21:01:59 +0000 UTC]

Hope it's nothing too serious!   

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Malika-Draws [2019-02-13 21:04:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh oh....What happens next😕

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WhiteKimya In reply to Malika-Draws [2019-02-14 21:00:56 +0000 UTC]

Ummm ummmmmmmm   

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yoyzira [2019-02-13 20:56:18 +0000 UTC]

Cuando piensan que no tenía esperanzas de vida... Viene el Ahadi y desafía el destino

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WhiteKimya In reply to yoyzira [2019-02-14 21:00:08 +0000 UTC]

Este Ahadi quiere causar problemas desde un principio  

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yoyzira In reply to WhiteKimya [2019-02-14 21:11:30 +0000 UTC]

Veamos si se rebela contra su futuro xd

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Vitlium [2019-02-13 20:32:26 +0000 UTC]

Well this explains why Scar is also the shallow end 

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WhiteKimya In reply to Vitlium [2019-02-14 20:59:03 +0000 UTC]

yup, sadly Scar inherited it

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Teparda [2019-02-13 20:32:04 +0000 UTC]

BUT ONE DAY...


WHAT HAPPENED I WANT TO KNOW AAAA 

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WhiteKimya In reply to Teparda [2019-02-14 20:57:33 +0000 UTC]

I love cliffhangers muahaha

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