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Published: 2007-06-04 08:15:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 614; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 9
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Such a classy shot! The glasses, the hair, the cirgarette. Wonderfully composed!
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I love this. First of all the composition. It's a very nice balance since her back follow the left side of the photo, and that's brilliant. Fantastic color tones, contrast and frameing. I also like the point of view. Great editing!
Still in my humble opinion there's just a little bit of cropping and it would've been perfect. It's very little space around her elbow so I'd crop about 1,5 cm at the bottom. And I'd also crop away the brighter plank or whatever it is, on the right side. I can't tell you for sure that this will make the photo better, cause well, I have to see the result and compare. But it's all up to you to decide whether you'll try or not. And I hope you take my suggestions as constructive critiqe.
Awesome shot.
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wow, thanks for the comment. I tried your suggestions and uploaded here, instead of cropping the side I crappily did a two-minute coverup I might re-do later, but I'm pretty happy with the results. the elbow I hadn't noticed, the bright pole was just something I wasn't incredibly bothered with the first time around.
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You're very welcome. It looks great! And the "two-minute coverup" works out very well too. (:
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lol, my gallery is a little overkill, and i haven't even started on some ideas XD
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