Comments: 186
seishinnookami [2016-06-04 11:12:01 +0000 UTC]
nope you did awesome *whips blood off nose* Pretty awesome indeed
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NightmareStream [2016-05-30 20:04:01 +0000 UTC]
This, by far, is the best lemon I have ever read in my life
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Go-girl10 [2016-02-13 19:57:44 +0000 UTC]
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3mo-freak [2015-08-15 04:17:40 +0000 UTC]
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MystinaDragon [2015-07-13 16:34:19 +0000 UTC]
And now reader-chan is pregnant lol
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MinVerden [2015-03-27 21:33:50 +0000 UTC]
OMG
That was so hot and sweet
oved the story
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bimlemis [2015-03-26 17:24:55 +0000 UTC]
So good!!
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dolphinpoof [2015-03-15 02:59:42 +0000 UTC]
Very well written.... 😍😍
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babybeiber [2015-03-09 04:27:18 +0000 UTC]
I need lots and lots of tissues.
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tensionking [2015-02-28 17:50:42 +0000 UTC]
loved it
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karas47 [2015-02-10 08:46:27 +0000 UTC]
I put tomatos to shame................ but I did like(duh of course!) really good build up, and a wonderful end.....
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Delilinna [2015-01-10 09:50:59 +0000 UTC]
Tooooooo cute!
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Minsfilia [2015-01-10 06:57:26 +0000 UTC]
0//////0
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KairaCecilHighwind [2014-12-15 15:38:12 +0000 UTC]
Isshin: Good job my son!
Ichigo: Dad!
Reader: 0/////0
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RebeccaKenealy95 [2014-10-18 05:05:00 +0000 UTC]
sorry it was beautifully done love it that is my way of saying it XD
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2ollexu2 [2014-09-27 06:56:36 +0000 UTC]
you put lest instead of last a few times and i have to say... It. Was... AWESOME!
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PangyaGurlVal [2014-08-24 00:28:37 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god this was beautifullll. My sister says my face is apparently red since I was blushing
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PankakeCarnivor [2014-08-11 16:28:23 +0000 UTC]
Let me tell you this lemon does not suck. It was beautiful and realistic, I think. Too many writers make "first time" lemons that are rushed and not at all like anything that would happen in real life. I could actually see this happening. You did Ichigo's character justice, kept it real, and above all gave me a nosebleed, haha. Thank you!!
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IloveERENjeager [2014-07-17 04:49:55 +0000 UTC]
a if rukia was still in the closet listening and peeking
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PankakeCarnivor In reply to IloveERENjeager [2014-08-11 16:28:51 +0000 UTC]
Haha now that would have been something! Pervy!Rukia for the win!!
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Anime-Freak23456 [2014-07-09 04:14:06 +0000 UTC]
I won't believe you when you say this was your first you played out his character well and it wasn't rushed you did excellent
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Never-Forget-Yato [2014-05-23 08:32:43 +0000 UTC]
:"D you did a wonderful job.
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NarutoYaoiLover13 [2014-05-06 01:21:48 +0000 UTC]
That lemon was actually good xD
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Miss-Inuyasha [2014-04-05 14:06:42 +0000 UTC]
what if someone walked in on us
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CanadaWannaBeFriend [2014-03-31 05:02:51 +0000 UTC]
Man, we are all perverts ... oh well!! :3
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Nepeta132 [2014-03-17 18:48:07 +0000 UTC]
I think my oc will need some paper to wipe her nosebleed just saying
Tsuki: No I do NOT need paper
Ichigo: Here *wipes her nose*
Tsuki: Thanks *blushes*
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ricybeck [2014-03-13 07:21:36 +0000 UTC]
... O/////O
I feel like a damn creeper reading this, it's fuckin' amazin'!
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wildwolf1111111111 In reply to ricybeck [2014-03-17 17:10:38 +0000 UTC]
I feel like a creeper writing this! Thank you!! >////<
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cupidlover114 [2014-03-02 08:38:17 +0000 UTC]
Can you please note me?
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