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Prevous page: [link]Page 6 in my wolf comic
I am trying to improve with my wolf comic, thatΒ΄s the main purpose with it in case you wonder why the style changes sometimes.
the dark wolf is the main char Windshade
the light grey is old grey.
I am not finish with the outher wolves design yet.
So I may change them with time.
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thanks ^^ I appricate it
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I love Windshade's expression on the third panel.
Nice job! I can't wait for more. ^^
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Beautiful detail in the opened mouth. Very ferocious xD
I love the style youve been drawing... everything in lately, its all very unique and interesting.
Only one thing i see that is a bit off( maybe this can help in the future) is that windshade is missing a few teeth, and they're are bit small. heres a skull reference for to help
[link]
Keep the fantastic work up!
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I have been very lazy the last days,becasue i am frustrated, I canΒ΄t focus
so I am not that very proud about this page,
I know, I should study and draw even more anatomy,
thanks for the link
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I think what your doing is amazing at the moment. I hope you become un-frustrated xD
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ooh, wonderful job as always! Your pages look to me as if they're getting better and better each time as your experiment.
Only thing I can say (for future reference) is maybe add some more sound effects, like the sound of the rain, the flapping of the wings on the bird as it flies away, or the wolf growling or snarling at the bird. As well, the rain seems a bit... I dunno. Not right in some of the panels. It looks a bit too thick in my opinion. Aside from panel 1, where it looks about perfect.
All-in-all though, beautiful job. :3
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yeah I notice the rain when I was finish with the page
anyway, I will study three weeks in a comic school this summer, maybe it will help me a bit
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the eyes look great in the fourth panel!
but where are their pupils in the last panel? they look like they're possessed
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well i didenΒ΄t care XD haha
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great detailing i love it umm just want to tell you you are great i need to hurry on mine but im not satified on first few page blah
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XD well i am only experimenting as usual
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I like the detail, and the close up eye shot ^^
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thanks for tell me
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You're welcome
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awsome page love all the detail its so beautiful ^^ can't wait to see more!
btw I'm holding a wolf deisgn / cover design contest with a DA sub for 1st place, its open till july 1st, care to join? [link]
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thanks, glad you like it
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haha, I love that birds face in the second panel x'D
it looks just so....like me x'D
and the closeup... simply... WOW o:
but I must say that I think the other wolves
paws look a little to big, and the back of the
grey one looks wierd somehow :3
don't get me wrong though, I love the way you draw
and you're soooooo much better at wolves than me
-tries to lear from your pics-
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yeah you right
not my best page
whatever...XD
makes the time go faster
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hehe, still I love the way you draw your wolves~ <3
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