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Description Finally some art submitted!
Today it's new page. Its not such a good time for me to write long description though,sorry.
I 'll just say that Im trying to change some things in my comic.

New first-drawn features:
+primitive backgrounds and plants,lets see how they'll do the job.
+New eye iris technique (changed few of them lastly)

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WingedWilly In reply to ??? [2013-11-17 15:35:35 +0000 UTC]

yeah improved him here a lil bit

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LucidPhoton In reply to WingedWilly [2013-11-17 21:11:31 +0000 UTC]

Awesome job.

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Jedder77 [2013-09-02 07:00:49 +0000 UTC]

Good. An understanding was established.

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Saphelle [2013-04-26 15:33:09 +0000 UTC]

in the pre-last pannel the trees came out a blur but in the last one the grass and the leaves are really cool

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WingedWilly In reply to Saphelle [2013-04-26 15:36:05 +0000 UTC]

alright thanks a lot ^^

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Saphelle In reply to WingedWilly [2013-04-26 19:10:24 +0000 UTC]

pleasure ^^

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LastKrystalDragon [2013-04-20 21:47:03 +0000 UTC]

c'mon Flay, hide ! ;_;

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WingedWilly In reply to LastKrystalDragon [2013-04-21 04:17:42 +0000 UTC]

hidey tiiime xD

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Safenna [2013-04-20 10:09:03 +0000 UTC]

Every page is better than the previous one I love it so much ^^ I like the eyes and the shading a lot

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WingedWilly In reply to Safenna [2013-04-20 10:50:07 +0000 UTC]

finally the eyes those I give them are similar to shiny gems ^^
or a deep sea

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Safenna In reply to WingedWilly [2013-04-21 17:29:58 +0000 UTC]

It looks great well done^^

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WingedWilly In reply to Safenna [2013-04-21 18:26:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot

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Safenna In reply to WingedWilly [2013-04-27 14:05:41 +0000 UTC]

you re welcome^^

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trafficeddie [2013-04-19 18:55:05 +0000 UTC]

after I looked at your gallery I realized that about 80% of your gallery either glows or it involves with light :3 , good page by the way .

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WingedWilly In reply to trafficeddie [2013-04-19 19:00:35 +0000 UTC]

Yeah,lights are awesome ^^

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trafficeddie In reply to WingedWilly [2013-04-19 19:04:35 +0000 UTC]

xD yup

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MomosArts [2013-04-19 13:05:14 +0000 UTC]

It's nice how much you improve with every page you're doing. I've seen so many pages of you now and you're really getting better with everything!

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WingedWilly In reply to MomosArts [2013-04-19 14:32:59 +0000 UTC]

Yeah,I have looked thought them all over again today,I really like the result.
There's few things I want to change about comic. Like better speech bubbles,some copyright line and number of page on picture.
p.s. Still cant decide what lineart I like more - thick or thin

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RusCSI [2013-04-19 08:57:51 +0000 UTC]

Отключай свет, Флэй! >3
Your English, sir!
3: ...don't want more troubles
7: ...how fast you find the solution (решаешь эти вопросы? проблемы? в английском 'find a solution' подходит идеально)

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WingedWilly In reply to RusCSI [2013-04-19 09:53:21 +0000 UTC]

Хотя все переводчики выдают,что и в единственном числе оно значит то же самое)

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RusCSI In reply to WingedWilly [2013-04-19 10:06:32 +0000 UTC]

Нууу обычно говорят "don't want to get into (any) more troubles" или "get more troubles". С единственным числом не употребляется в этом случае

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WingedWilly In reply to RusCSI [2013-04-19 09:52:10 +0000 UTC]

Насчет 3-го может быть но в 7-м мой дорогой консультант-англичанин сказал,что в принципе нормально.

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RusCSI In reply to WingedWilly [2013-04-19 09:59:03 +0000 UTC]

Лично мне 7-е было непонятно, хотя я текстов перечитала немало на английском.
Ничего не хочу говорить про консультанта, но даже если так, то грамматик он никакой - '...you pick a decision to those questions...' ("ты выбираешь решение на эти вопросы" - труднопонимательная фраза какая-то) с:

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WingedWilly In reply to RusCSI [2013-04-19 11:07:05 +0000 UTC]

она может не совсем понимает,что я хочу сказать.

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RusCSI In reply to WingedWilly [2013-04-19 11:09:35 +0000 UTC]

Если она не знает русского, то точно xD

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WingedWilly In reply to RusCSI [2013-04-19 11:13:07 +0000 UTC]

ну скорее всего просто эффект сломанного телефона - я делаю свой вариант перевода,а она старается исправлять.

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RusCSI In reply to WingedWilly [2013-04-19 11:16:21 +0000 UTC]

Не знаю, ладно смысл, это одно, но она пропускает очевидные ошибки в грамматике :/

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WingedWilly In reply to RusCSI [2013-04-19 14:28:31 +0000 UTC]

может быть...

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Dantedragon [2013-04-19 08:18:25 +0000 UTC]

WOW!!! yet another great page from ya, Flay!!!well done

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WingedWilly In reply to Dantedragon [2013-04-19 08:52:10 +0000 UTC]

Thankies

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Dantedragon In reply to WingedWilly [2013-04-19 09:03:44 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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Asqard [2013-04-19 06:18:29 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh I love the grass and leaves in the last panel <3

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WingedWilly In reply to Asqard [2013-04-19 08:51:54 +0000 UTC]

Its not that bad as I thought it is? YAY!

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Wolfie661 [2013-04-18 21:47:28 +0000 UTC]

lol want another hug XD

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WingedWilly In reply to Wolfie661 [2013-04-19 03:34:48 +0000 UTC]

yeah,she means that grab from guard xD

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Wolfie661 In reply to WingedWilly [2013-04-19 09:02:02 +0000 UTC]

yeah i know XDDD

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Wolf-Rizer [2013-04-18 21:29:38 +0000 UTC]

Nice comic and scenes. Although I did notice a few misspelled words.

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WingedWilly In reply to Wolf-Rizer [2013-04-19 03:32:51 +0000 UTC]

yeah,there should be few...feel free to tell me where it is.)

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Wolf-Rizer In reply to WingedWilly [2013-04-19 12:48:13 +0000 UTC]

Okay. "Supporse" is spelled "suppose" in the first word bubble. had already beaten to the rest of the errors.

Have a good day/afternoon!

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WingedWilly In reply to Wolf-Rizer [2013-04-19 14:29:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot thats really helpful ^^

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victordragon747 [2013-04-18 19:53:22 +0000 UTC]

So exciting, you don't stop improving the shaing and storyline!!

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WingedWilly In reply to victordragon747 [2013-04-19 03:36:02 +0000 UTC]

lol alright xD Im just I keeps it up

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iiDragonfantasyArt [2013-04-18 19:27:39 +0000 UTC]

EEEEE THE SUSPENNNNSEEEEEE

This is awesome! XDDD I hope they aren't caught ^^ (though Flay(isnt that the blue guy's name? ) is at a bit of a disadvantage with those glowing markings! He better hide good!)

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WingedWilly In reply to iiDragonfantasyArt [2013-04-19 03:38:43 +0000 UTC]

yeah,he should think of that and get some plan.

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iiDragonfantasyArt In reply to WingedWilly [2013-04-19 15:39:42 +0000 UTC]

Haha, yeah XD

Oh my gosh, I just re-read your comic, by the way! ^^ I had seen it when I had first joined DA and re-reading just brings back memories XD all I can say is that this comic is AWESOME I mean, this stands out to all of the other comics I've seen!!!

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WingedWilly In reply to iiDragonfantasyArt [2013-04-19 15:52:22 +0000 UTC]

what,really? gosh... this is best thing I heard about my comic so far ^^
You must be means story line or sth like that not the quality xWx

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iiDragonfantasyArt In reply to WingedWilly [2013-04-19 15:55:51 +0000 UTC]

Seriously?

The story line and the art is amazing! I was also looking back on your old pages and thinking, wow, he has improved so much!

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WingedWilly In reply to iiDragonfantasyArt [2013-04-19 16:01:33 +0000 UTC]

yeah I did same today xD
Yay thanks ^^
geez guys you all are so amazing thats why I keeps drawing for ya all

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smeagle123 [2013-04-18 18:42:19 +0000 UTC]

Nice. Wonder why he does glow, I need to read this from the beginning

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WingedWilly In reply to smeagle123 [2013-04-19 03:33:53 +0000 UTC]

comic doesnt tell it yet

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