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WingedWilly In reply to ??? [2013-11-17 15:35:35 +0000 UTC]
yeah improved him here a lil bit
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Jedder77 [2013-09-02 07:00:49 +0000 UTC]
Good. An understanding was established.
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Saphelle [2013-04-26 15:33:09 +0000 UTC]
in the pre-last pannel the trees came out a blur but in the last one the grass and the leaves are really cool
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WingedWilly In reply to Saphelle [2013-04-26 15:36:05 +0000 UTC]
alright thanks a lot ^^
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WingedWilly In reply to Safenna [2013-04-20 10:50:07 +0000 UTC]
finally the eyes those I give them are similar to shiny gems ^^
or a deep sea
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trafficeddie [2013-04-19 18:55:05 +0000 UTC]
after I looked at your gallery I realized that about 80% of your gallery either glows or it involves with light :3 , good page by the way .
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MomosArts [2013-04-19 13:05:14 +0000 UTC]
It's nice how much you improve with every page you're doing. I've seen so many pages of you now and you're really getting better with everything!
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WingedWilly In reply to MomosArts [2013-04-19 14:32:59 +0000 UTC]
Yeah,I have looked thought them all over again today,I really like the result.
There's few things I want to change about comic. Like better speech bubbles,some copyright line and number of page on picture.
p.s. Still cant decide what lineart I like more - thick or thin
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RusCSI [2013-04-19 08:57:51 +0000 UTC]
Отключай свет, Флэй! >3
Your English, sir!
3: ...don't want more troubles
7: ...how fast you find the solution (решаешь эти вопросы? проблемы? в английском 'find a solution' подходит идеально)
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WingedWilly In reply to RusCSI [2013-04-19 09:53:21 +0000 UTC]
Хотя все переводчики выдают,что и в единственном числе оно значит то же самое)
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RusCSI In reply to WingedWilly [2013-04-19 10:06:32 +0000 UTC]
Нууу обычно говорят "don't want to get into (any) more troubles" или "get more troubles". С единственным числом не употребляется в этом случае
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WingedWilly In reply to RusCSI [2013-04-19 09:52:10 +0000 UTC]
Насчет 3-го может быть но в 7-м мой дорогой консультант-англичанин сказал,что в принципе нормально.
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RusCSI In reply to WingedWilly [2013-04-19 09:59:03 +0000 UTC]
Лично мне 7-е было непонятно, хотя я текстов перечитала немало на английском.
Ничего не хочу говорить про консультанта, но даже если так, то грамматик он никакой - '...you pick a decision to those questions...' ("ты выбираешь решение на эти вопросы" - труднопонимательная фраза какая-то) с:
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WingedWilly In reply to RusCSI [2013-04-19 11:07:05 +0000 UTC]
она может не совсем понимает,что я хочу сказать.
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RusCSI In reply to WingedWilly [2013-04-19 11:09:35 +0000 UTC]
Если она не знает русского, то точно xD
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WingedWilly In reply to RusCSI [2013-04-19 11:13:07 +0000 UTC]
ну скорее всего просто эффект сломанного телефона - я делаю свой вариант перевода,а она старается исправлять.
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RusCSI In reply to WingedWilly [2013-04-19 11:16:21 +0000 UTC]
Не знаю, ладно смысл, это одно, но она пропускает очевидные ошибки в грамматике :/
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Asqard [2013-04-19 06:18:29 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh I love the grass and leaves in the last panel <3
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WingedWilly In reply to Asqard [2013-04-19 08:51:54 +0000 UTC]
Its not that bad as I thought it is? YAY!
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Wolfie661 [2013-04-18 21:47:28 +0000 UTC]
lol want another hug XD
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WingedWilly In reply to Wolfie661 [2013-04-19 03:34:48 +0000 UTC]
yeah,she means that grab from guard xD
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WingedWilly In reply to Wolf-Rizer [2013-04-19 03:32:51 +0000 UTC]
yeah,there should be few...feel free to tell me where it is.)
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Wolf-Rizer In reply to WingedWilly [2013-04-19 12:48:13 +0000 UTC]
Okay. "Supporse" is spelled "suppose" in the first word bubble. had already beaten to the rest of the errors.
Have a good day/afternoon!
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WingedWilly In reply to Wolf-Rizer [2013-04-19 14:29:06 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot thats really helpful ^^
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victordragon747 [2013-04-18 19:53:22 +0000 UTC]
So exciting, you don't stop improving the shaing and storyline!!
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WingedWilly In reply to iiDragonfantasyArt [2013-04-19 15:52:22 +0000 UTC]
what,really? gosh... this is best thing I heard about my comic so far ^^
You must be means story line or sth like that not the quality xWx
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WingedWilly In reply to iiDragonfantasyArt [2013-04-19 16:01:33 +0000 UTC]
yeah I did same today xD
Yay thanks ^^
geez guys you all are so amazing thats why I keeps drawing for ya all
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smeagle123 [2013-04-18 18:42:19 +0000 UTC]
Nice. Wonder why he does glow, I need to read this from the beginning
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