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wish-sticks ā€” i will rest by the river and bloom by-sa
Published: 2013-06-15 15:40:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1919; Favourites: 78; Downloads: 0
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Description i have eaten so many cherries i have lost count,
my fingers bundled up with their stems, my teeth aching.
with the fruit flesh still threaded around them, the seeds
look like little organs, little stone hearts:
i eat them all, every one. maybe they will hatch in my stomach
like bitter eggs, and a thousand hundred giant trees will
grow slowly though my bones and my bloodstream, maybe they will
burst up and out through my mouth. i will be a bleeding flowerpot,
a forest floor with shoes, an incubator. i will be the zombie
apocalypse of cherry trees. i will grow my wooden teeth through the roof.
my bad decisions will touch the sky.
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Comments: 18

copper9lives [2014-10-29 04:10:56 +0000 UTC]

What an astonishing and brilliant vision!

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Necrokinetic [2014-10-27 20:09:11 +0000 UTC]

Amazing!

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TheGalleryOfEve [2014-10-27 15:25:08 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!!
Iā€™m very happy for you!!!

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Weidenlied [2014-10-27 11:17:49 +0000 UTC]

Woah, I thought this would be a nice little nothing, and then you went and put all those dark images in it. Zombie apocalypse of the cherry trees indeed. I love the idea, and the way you wrote it. The title is so completely misleading and nice that, when you have finished reading this little gem, it is rather disturbing, like a drawing of a heart with blodd or something like that.
Well-deserved DD! Congrats for that.

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Ammika-wind [2014-10-27 10:59:26 +0000 UTC]

wow! very deceptive title but i love how it goes from something as innocent as eating cherries to becoming the 'zombie apocalypse of cherry trees', love it

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Undomiel321 [2014-02-01 21:28:48 +0000 UTC]

Well deserved DLD! I love how deceptive the title is. I thought I was going to read something relaxing, and then all this dark imagery, bam! Very nice.Ā 

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successwithhonor [2014-01-22 06:25:35 +0000 UTC]

this just gets to me, in that romantic, existential way

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saltwaterlungs [2014-01-19 18:22:46 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic imagery and word choice! Congrats on the DLD!

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DailyLitDeviations [2014-01-19 05:54:34 +0000 UTC]

Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DailyLitDeviations and has been selected as our "Pick of the Day". It is featured in a news article here: dailylitdeviations.deviantart.ā€¦ and on our main page.

Keep writing and keep creating.

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Lintu47 [2013-06-17 10:11:39 +0000 UTC]

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wish-sticks In reply to Lintu47 [2013-06-21 22:47:06 +0000 UTC]

oh my god wow thank u

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Lintu47 In reply to wish-sticks [2013-06-24 16:25:12 +0000 UTC]

    My pleasure

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julia-caitlin [2013-06-17 10:08:12 +0000 UTC]

i just really like that first line.

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toxic-nebulae [2013-06-16 02:59:44 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely adore this
but you used the word "stomach" twice-- I'd consider revision.

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wish-sticks In reply to toxic-nebulae [2013-06-21 22:46:11 +0000 UTC]

ah shit i thought i'd caught all the repetitions - thank you! <3

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toxic-nebulae In reply to wish-sticks [2013-06-22 17:40:59 +0000 UTC]

of course.

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Hyalma [2013-06-15 19:09:05 +0000 UTC]

Excellent.

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trikn [2013-06-15 18:29:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god you make me so inspired

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