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Published: 2018-03-06 04:36:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 859; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 6
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Heeeey! Sorry for the late update, I have not abandoned this little story. I re-worked the dialog and the conversation for the following pages so all could flow more easily and quickly. My problem for this page is that I did the lineart back in December and I hate it already XD I hope it'll be better for the next pages!
Haha! I had fun with the assistant. "Oh look! I have work over there, away from the drama!"

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Comments: 5

Andromeva [2018-03-08 09:56:57 +0000 UTC]

Oooooooh I see now. I think the dialogue fix does help. uvu
Now it's very clear (for my d e n s e mind) how things are rolling.

I'm loving these comics, gurl. <3

Also.
I'm loving the assistant. XD That expression is GOLD.

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WitchinVikin In reply to Andromeva [2018-03-09 01:46:11 +0000 UTC]

I changed the dialog for the up-coming pages, not so much in this one :3

Thank you very much

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gizmo01 [2018-03-06 09:54:29 +0000 UTC]

"Alcool" Now that sounds like a pretty chill-pill for a drink

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WitchinVikin In reply to gizmo01 [2018-03-06 11:39:07 +0000 UTC]

That's the french spelling XP I'll arrange it as soon as I can.

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gizmo01 In reply to WitchinVikin [2018-03-06 13:18:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh okey

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