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Published: 2008-06-21 11:56:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 446; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 14
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Mina from XS Hybrid again. she's got on a set of nice sony headphones...
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Wow, great job I wish I could draw as nice as you. I think it'd be nice if you showed some of the left side of the body as it is it looks a little blank on the left side.
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Wow. I have to say, I was very impressed when I saw this at first. The only few things I would suggest, is that 1) the hair shading, while it fills up the area and makes everything seem more 'real' the highlites themselves look a little too 'blocky' and the shading is darker in some areas that look more like they would be hit by a lightsource. For tutorials on hair, I would suggest =joodlez 's guide. [link] Granted, it's rather old, but it gives a few good tips on shading hair.
2) The second thing I noticed is that the entire image seems to be leaning a little too far to the right diagonally. A good way to fix this is that you simply turn around the picture in the W.I.P stage so you're looking at the backside of the paper, and hold it up to a light of some sort. Or, point the image at a mirror, and look at it's reflection. The reverse image always gives away mistakes, asymmetrical drawings, and such. I guess it's that whole 'looking at things from a different perspective' idea.
Methinks this deserves a fav. 8D
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wow! thanks for your critique! the tutorial is cool! thank you!
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Gah i have to critque this!! But it's so good.
I think the one thing is the bottom of the arm maybe have a look at your own arm when it bends in the mirror.
Everything else just looks so good, wish i could draw like this
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ah yes, i see it's the arm that's got a lot of problems eh? hahaa never was good at hands. >< thanks for the critique though! ^ ^
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Wow! I love this! I wouldn't know where to start critiquing though!
Well, on the hand you could define it a little more. Like, it goes up the arm and gets to a sort of blob, then has a really detailed pinky, ya know? XD
But I love it, the hair and the expression are just beautiful X3
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thanks for the critique. i see what you mean about the blob.... my shading is not up to par.... ><
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thanks! hey! you got first comment! ^ ^
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yuppers =^_^= ha all u other peoples
muahahahaha!!!
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