creepyponylover [2015-04-06 01:03:02 +0000 UTC]
The ending line got me, I just started laughing, it was a bit hard to stop. Other then that I think this is amazing writing! Both chapters (I think it's stupid to write a critiques on the first chapter and no the next one if it's already out.) if you are going to continue then series I would love that!
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