Comments: 28
DerpyDashdaBluejay [2016-09-22 00:29:29 +0000 UTC]
I hope you haven't quit on writing because this is beyond adorable.
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ThielSkinner [2016-06-30 13:00:54 +0000 UTC]
Talk russian to me, Heavy, I'm ready
And, man, so adorable! The feels!
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FurryEXE6 [2016-06-02 17:00:44 +0000 UTC]
THE FEELS SU PRECIOUS
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CeliWellyBelly [2016-03-07 05:53:51 +0000 UTC]
WHAT DID I DO TO DESERVE THIS ADORABLE HEART ATTACK
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art3mis254 [2016-01-17 20:10:15 +0000 UTC]
OH MY CHUCK THIS IS CONPLETLY ADORABLE
I LOVE IT
SO FRICKEN ADORABLE, DA?
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TsutaKarin [2015-12-10 11:31:19 +0000 UTC]
mY HEART
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AskDunaNichs [2015-11-06 03:46:56 +0000 UTC]
Hmm... because there are (rightfully) several comments on here talking about how cute this is, I'm going to be a b***h and write a proper review instead.
You did a good job of keeping in character and Heavy's grammatical errors were realistic as opposed to the really stupid ones you see in a lot of fanfiction. (Some authors are really bad and you can't even figure out what he's trying to say.) Altogether, the writing was quite good.
My one criticism is actually a bit of a nit-pick. Why is he signing off as Boris? Is it a nickname or something? Heavy's official name is Misha.
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Euryalex In reply to AskDunaNichs [2017-05-07 11:58:40 +0000 UTC]
Maybe because of 'Boris The Bear'? Wasn't that a comic book or something?
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LoZGamer316 [2015-08-18 07:05:43 +0000 UTC]
Whale, I'm grinning like an idiot. This was friggin' adorabible!
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Missmurdder [2015-06-17 19:20:24 +0000 UTC]
This is too cute, heavy is a little tumshi x3
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TeamRocketsPikachu10 [2015-06-16 09:07:34 +0000 UTC]
'Mama bear'
AH
HEAVY
STOP
MY HEART ,U;
This is adorable ♡♡♡
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FnafShipper1903 [2015-02-21 15:13:49 +0000 UTC]
Smoosh......
That's adorable.
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MissPuffyGamer [2015-01-10 00:56:21 +0000 UTC]
AWWW HEAVYS LETTER IS SO ADORABLE! THATS WHY I LOVE HIM! ^.^
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accailia118 [2015-01-06 02:57:01 +0000 UTC]
More love letters please.
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cyndaquit [2014-10-04 19:02:49 +0000 UTC]
SO KAWAII <3 Heavy is kinda cute. it would be good if there was a Heavy Papa Bear and Pregnant Mama Bear fanfiction.
as i said, this is just so KAWAII.
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missdutch32 [2014-09-21 07:48:42 +0000 UTC]
so cute!!!!!!!! ahhh *fangirling over here*
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That-Dappled-Pegasi [2014-08-22 02:28:25 +0000 UTC]
SOMEONE WRITE HEAVY PAPA BEAR X PREGNANT READER MOMMA BEAR RIGHT NOW.
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Emo-Kaylah [2014-07-21 23:54:30 +0000 UTC]
I read it in his voice, darn it Heavy why do you have to be just precious?
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cyndaquit In reply to Emo-Kaylah [2014-11-22 22:27:17 +0000 UTC]
Heavy is just so adorable. if you don't love Heavy, wtf is wrong with you, Heavy is the most precious guy there.
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Sydney1976 [2014-04-20 22:57:13 +0000 UTC]
THIS IS SO CUTE!!!!!!! MY HEART JUST MELTED FROM CUTENESS OVERLOAD!!!!!!!!!!!
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murdocisgod [2014-04-10 01:00:45 +0000 UTC]
Ooooh myyyyy gooood my heart melts from the cuteness!! I'm crying!
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WolfPrincess94 In reply to murdocisgod [2014-04-10 01:04:49 +0000 UTC]
Ah! Don't cry! I didn't mean to make people cry from the fluffness!
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murdocisgod In reply to WolfPrincess94 [2014-04-10 01:29:47 +0000 UTC]
I want to see a fic to this! With a tiny babeh for heavy ;m;
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WolfPrincess94 In reply to murdocisgod [2014-04-10 02:17:09 +0000 UTC]
I may see what I can do~ I just couldn't get the idea of Heavy wanting to be a dad out of my head, I can see him as the type to want to spoil a little girl and carry her around gently like a little doll~ *Scurries off to write more fluff*
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