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Published: 2016-08-15 19:06:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 1333; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 4
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And the last page too.Page one:wollfisch.deviantart.com/art/Sā¦
Art and Characters c) me
Drawn with copic markers and colored pencils
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Comments: 33
Daaaawwww, he's pretty much cuteness incarnate!
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Like everyone else here, I am all "aww" in this.
But also... I really admire the way how you weave really deep feeling in your short comics... You have a talent to do that.
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Thank you very much, that means a lot to me
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I got this in my mind, when I read it:
Soorn: "Can you say it? S-o-o-r-n"
Staceel: "Woon?"
Soorn: "Now you got it"
*10 minutes later.*
Staceel: *Pointing around and saying Woon to anything he sees*
Soorn: "Maybe not"
But beside that, (d)awwwwww ^^
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Isn't that the point here? o_0
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I think, I guess I was abit too tired when I wrote that
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"Daaaww" is exactly the "word" I hoped for ^^
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And "Awww" is another "word" I hoped for ^^
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Glad I could deliver.
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Heh, now you must write a story with fluffy hatchlings!
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I don't think Wolly needs the competition...
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Heh, true...still, it'd be nice to do some hatchling fluff!
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Are you referring to fluffy hatchlings, or fluff about hatchlings?
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The latter...but the former could be done too, if it's something like Ddraig's hatchlings all bundled up in winter clothing?
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Oh right, yeah, something winter themed could do well.
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Heh, I can picture Ddraig fussing over her hatchlings and practically bundling them up in fluffy outfits...with a quiet Alex Jr. and a sulky Selena a bit overwhelmed by them. Although then again, Ddraig's looked after Eve and not gone to those extremes...perhaps it's Alexander who'd fuss over them like that, while Ddraig insists that's really not needed? Actually, that could make for a sweet scene...Alexander panicking about doing parental things and keeping Elwynn safe, and Ddraig soothing him and insisting that he's doing fine, or that Elwynn doesn't need to be that mollycoddled...and then at the end if she's having a moment with Eve, Eve can point out that she was a great mother, and the fact that she knows all this stuff about hatchlings is proof!
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Hm, true... But then again, Ddraig did go out specifically to buy Eve woollies when she was little.
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Oh, I know, I just meant she didn't wrap her from head to toe in blankets; she was sensible and just got her what she needed to stay warm.
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In any case, there are some cute ideas in there...adorable hatchlings, Alexander panicking and being soothed by Ddraig, and Ddraig being comforted by Eve about being a good Mum to her!
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Perhaps that could even be used to expand that half-written story about Ddraig reading to Elwynn? That could be the ending of it!
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Hm, maybe... Maybe it'll be cold that night, or a cold day tomorrow, so they'll have to sort out woollies the day after.
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Oh, I was thinking it could be the other way around; the story could be a short "A day in the life of" story that begins with it snowing, and Ddraig and Alexander getting Elwynn ready to play outside, then in the evening, they settle down by the fire to read a book, and Eve joins them...or it could be multiple drabbles; as someone noted on the Logan chapter, the drabbles are meant to be short...
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Something to keep in mind, I guess...little fluffy or funny stories without any overarching story would thrive as drabbles!
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