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If you are a new reader or you favorite, I would appreciate your feedback. Please don't "fav and run"About the page
Go narrator no one cares about, go!
Kado used to be narrator, but I changed that. Now we have some random modern wolf narrating, I suppose. Anyway I REALLY REALLY hope that somehow Wolved becomes a popular comic. I feel with the new story it just might work. 
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Simple, yet intriguing. I like it -thumbs up-
I agree with the first crit, but the plot sounds interesting.
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This sound extremely interesting. I fav nowww thnx
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Thank you for the fav and watch and your interest!
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What do you mean? XD Also it's not made up, that's what it was actually called back then.
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Pangea! where the land was full of wonderous,strange,and itneresting creatures!! I like ur prologue!
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Ill be looking forward to new pages!
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Thanks! That's what I was going for.
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Okay I really like how you went with the last version, and I really didn't want that to change. However, you definitely caught my attention with the Pangea comment. Now the black background would be better if it were a game or movie (Or the definite anime I wanna see out of this) and they appeared as someone was saying them, but for now a comic I would rather either a map of Pangea or do the cave drawings like you did in the last version. Oh well, bit late now though, and I don't really mind in the end.
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I will definatly consider that, as these pages may be redone.
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i do think Wolved has definate potential to become popular! Just gotta give people the time to come across it and see the characters! But for the meantime if you're still enjoying making it i say keep going and the fans should grow as the story does! Good luck though! I plan to keep reading and i think its a very intriguing storyline and from what iv seen i cant wait to see the rest!
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Thank you so much for the encouragement!
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no probs! only saying what i thinks true!
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Crits: Okay, when you're laying out wording for something like this, you have to make it visually appealing in the LAYOUT of the page, not just in the wording, font, ect. In how you've done it now, it's kind of scrambled and messy and it doesn't lead the eye very well. It's just like paneling a comic format. You really need to reformat this so you put emphasis on important terms, and space it out so it holds some drama as well; the other one was a lot better with that. Also; I think you should take full advantage of the Photoshop's "centering" feature on this one, instead of having it off to the side like that. Off to the side, it just looks choppy. Also, like I critiqued on the other page, run it through Word; it's your best editor. 
Comments: I realy lie the final emphasis on the last part. <3 And like I said before, you're really good at putting across emotions and feelings. I don't know how you do it, but it's done. xD It's this brilliant skill I long for. D: The textures in the back are also very subtle, but nice, and give that definate storytime feel to this. Ba-da-ba-ba-ba, I'm lovin' it. <33 /shot
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Thanks!
Oh yes now that I look back at it I see the messiness. ;-;
Oh well, I will fix that someday. Currently when I went to open photoshop it said my material files and another type of file had been corrupted. ;-; Luckily the only thing that's gone wrong in what I use is that photoshop set itself to default and for the third time one of my psd files was destroyed. Luckily I have the jpeg of it's finished version still. I think it happened due to me turning off the main switch on my computer instead of shutting down properly.;-;/slapped
And yes yes emphasis 
Anyway- thanks for the crits!
And also thanks for your comment, I would give the "talent" to you to if I knew how. :S
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