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WordOfChen — I Am So Disturbed
Published: 2012-03-03 15:22:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 10535; Favourites: 478; Downloads: 69
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Description I Am So Disturbed:

How long will it burn me,
In darkness cloaked.
Raped by a voice,
Of death it spoke.

The ceiling revolves with words of sorrow,
Draped on the walls, they are creatures hollow.
Screaming and crying, the death we seek,
The eyes that stare, when I fall asleep.

Voiceless whispers and empty sound,
The pattern of drool, that stains the ground.
Endlessly scratching at walls and eyes,
I stare at reflections that breathe to die.

The darkened shadows that seem to stain,
The constant sound of a pouring rain.
Wherever I go, the eyes that lead,
Within me planting a dirty seed.

Again and again I am twisted by sound,
I wake in a room that seems to surround.
I see myself, but I know it's not me,
What is man, in the mirror I see...

"You sir, have got terrible bags beneath your eyes!"

-Chen Yuan Wen, 3rd March 2012
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Comments: 366

DeathStreak000 [2012-09-24 20:10:16 +0000 UTC]

well, atleast im not alone in that sense.., quite honestly, this work touches me, thank you for being quite the poet...

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WordOfChen In reply to DeathStreak000 [2012-09-27 09:48:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for enjoying it. I might do an updated version of this sometime soon ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates

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DeathStreak000 In reply to WordOfChen [2012-10-01 17:21:02 +0000 UTC]

i suppose it would be appropriate to say i look forward to it...

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flabaflaba123 [2012-04-15 16:11:52 +0000 UTC]

..... Geez. Looking at this, I see the little poems I used to write when I was younger were clearly crap. I'm jealous of your writing prowess :S

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JellyBeanBullet [2012-04-11 02:32:37 +0000 UTC]

im afraid of the dark (18 years old lol) and this describes my fear so well XD

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WordOfChen In reply to JellyBeanBullet [2012-04-13 03:26:35 +0000 UTC]

Arrr haha, glad ta know that :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates

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Ikkie-Chan [2012-04-03 15:15:51 +0000 UTC]

My english isn't so good, so I'm not able to understand everything I read :3
Poety is much more complicated and harder to understand, but I like this Text

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WordOfChen In reply to Ikkie-Chan [2012-04-05 15:59:19 +0000 UTC]

Oh that's okay. thank you ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates

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o0SHeeP0o [2012-03-28 12:30:58 +0000 UTC]

well hope you are fine (by now) yeah i am slow ...

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WordOfChen In reply to o0SHeeP0o [2012-03-29 08:02:00 +0000 UTC]

Arrr yes I am ;3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate

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o0SHeeP0o In reply to WordOfChen [2012-03-29 09:59:29 +0000 UTC]

glad to hear it is not severe

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Pickled-Herring [2012-03-10 00:16:07 +0000 UTC]

Kind of hits home in a lot of ways...I like it though! Reminds me, I should probably go work on my poety.

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WordOfChen In reply to Pickled-Herring [2012-03-10 01:14:13 +0000 UTC]

Arrr thank ye so kindly fer readin' and enjoyin' me work.

Drop a share if ya like it enough ;3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate

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Pickled-Herring In reply to WordOfChen [2012-03-11 15:46:55 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Pickled-Herring In reply to Pickled-Herring [2012-03-10 00:16:17 +0000 UTC]

poetry*

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Zachary1991 [2012-03-08 16:06:58 +0000 UTC]

Most enjoyable. I need to get the time to go through more of your work. You're most talented.

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WordOfChen In reply to Zachary1991 [2012-03-08 16:18:39 +0000 UTC]

Arrr thank ye so kindly fer that :3

I'm glad you liked it

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate

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callmibambi394 [2012-03-06 02:46:06 +0000 UTC]

I love the power in each word.

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WordOfChen In reply to callmibambi394 [2012-03-07 15:08:09 +0000 UTC]

Arrr thank ye, glad ye liked it ^^

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate

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willyamPax [2012-03-05 04:59:50 +0000 UTC]

such power in words...great work...

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WordOfChen In reply to willyamPax [2012-03-05 10:35:25 +0000 UTC]

Arrr thank ye kindly, glad ye enjoyed it ^^

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate

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WateryGrave [2012-03-05 04:28:31 +0000 UTC]

Interesting~

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WordOfChen In reply to WateryGrave [2012-03-05 10:35:34 +0000 UTC]

Arrr thank ye very much fer tha compliment :3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate

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A1r2i3e4l5 [2012-03-04 23:31:27 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that was dark. I really like it though, it somehow reminded me of an asylum

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WordOfChen In reply to A1r2i3e4l5 [2012-03-05 10:35:45 +0000 UTC]

Arrr indeed, I do some asylum pieces every now and again ^^

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate

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RainpathlovesArtemis [2012-03-04 22:59:56 +0000 UTC]

deep.

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WordOfChen In reply to RainpathlovesArtemis [2012-03-05 10:35:51 +0000 UTC]

Arrr thank ye :3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate

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JoltingAdlaiR [2012-03-04 20:30:23 +0000 UTC]

O____O Woh that headache is something I don't ever want to meet.

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WordOfChen In reply to JoltingAdlaiR [2012-03-05 10:36:04 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I pray ye don't meet it then ^^

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate

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klevry1 [2012-03-04 19:57:42 +0000 UTC]

dang, i loved the poem, and how is your headache? have you tried water and aspirin?

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WordOfChen In reply to klevry1 [2012-03-05 10:36:21 +0000 UTC]

Arrr, took some neurofen ^^

I'm fine Olivia :3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate

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klevry1 In reply to WordOfChen [2012-03-05 23:34:13 +0000 UTC]

oh thats good ^^

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thebloodedrose [2012-03-04 18:33:34 +0000 UTC]

We all wear masks and sometimes we hide in them.Which mean we don't ourselves at all until we take the mask off. Thats what this poem is telling me.

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WordOfChen In reply to thebloodedrose [2012-03-05 10:36:46 +0000 UTC]

Arrr, that's true, but at the same time, sometimes we even forget we are. When we wear it too much ^^

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate

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thebloodedrose In reply to WordOfChen [2012-03-05 12:29:40 +0000 UTC]

Thats also true.If only people will look beyond their mask.

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RedButterflyDemon [2012-03-04 18:32:42 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes I feel like the reflection in mirror isn't me..
Good one

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WordOfChen In reply to RedButterflyDemon [2012-03-05 10:36:50 +0000 UTC]

Arrr thank ye ;3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate

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ErickaBean [2012-03-04 17:58:57 +0000 UTC]

I don't know why but th' last line made me chuckle :3
Yet another fine an' dandy peice Cap'n

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WordOfChen In reply to ErickaBean [2012-03-05 10:36:59 +0000 UTC]

That's because it was meant to be humourous :3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate

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LiekABawsBitch [2012-03-04 16:54:02 +0000 UTC]

And this is definitely the reason why I'm watching you!

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WordOfChen In reply to LiekABawsBitch [2012-03-05 10:37:17 +0000 UTC]

Arrr thank ye very much, hope more of my releases please ya :3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate

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LiekABawsBitch In reply to WordOfChen [2012-03-05 16:14:55 +0000 UTC]

All of your releases are amazing!

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WordOfChen In reply to LiekABawsBitch [2012-03-05 16:21:56 +0000 UTC]

Arr thank ye, I try ta put me heart inta all of them ^^

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate

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LiekABawsBitch In reply to WordOfChen [2012-03-05 16:28:07 +0000 UTC]

^.^ It's good you do, that's why they're so good!

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WordOfChen In reply to LiekABawsBitch [2012-03-07 15:29:07 +0000 UTC]

Arrr I can hope so :3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate

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LiekABawsBitch In reply to WordOfChen [2012-03-22 02:00:09 +0000 UTC]

Are you back yett? D:

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WordOfChen In reply to LiekABawsBitch [2012-03-23 03:04:52 +0000 UTC]

Arrr I am xD

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate

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FabrykaImaginacji [2012-03-04 16:44:54 +0000 UTC]

Fascinating

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WordOfChen In reply to FabrykaImaginacji [2012-03-05 10:37:25 +0000 UTC]

Arrr thank ye kindly. Glad ya enjoyed it ^^

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate

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FabrykaImaginacji In reply to WordOfChen [2012-03-06 10:14:14 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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