Comments: 22
AtlasSniperman [2015-02-04 05:53:28 +0000 UTC]
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The planning and attention to detail really shows in this piece. Focusing purely on the colours to begin; you've done an excellent job incorporating not only what colours make up Samurott's design, but also where each colour falls on the character. The shading is wonderful as well, with the sharper shading occurring closer to the ground, and the shadow on the floor matching the intensity of the shadows across her body as you move upward. Her posture and action pose do imply a water theme very well, and with a little more work into the shading of the background around her; it may be possible to maker her appear to move as the eyes drift away.
Her attire is quite interesting, with the heart shaped from the vest and her blue top being a very nice idea, though a little extra definition between the vest and top may make this concept easier to identify. The chain and ball between the plates of her legs is a little odd, being the largest point of red in a very blue image has the effect of drawing the eyes to her crotch. The positioning of armour and spikes on her forearms and legs is quite good, though the angles of the two spikes on her legs don't seem to match, which can be a little distracting if it is noticed. The Spearheads/arrowtip weapons are a nice idea, but they appear perhaps a little too big to be realistically usable.
The background works well and suits the theme perfectly. As said before; the floor/bottom of the background works well for the use of shadow, and the lines separating the three sections serve an interesting function in that her positioning over them draws the eye from any part of the image along to her.
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Wraeclast In reply to AtlasSniperman [2015-02-04 20:13:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for the well thought out critique! It's much appreciated ^^
Full of lots of very helpful advice that will help me improve (such a nice change from most DA critiques), especially the critique about the functionality of some parts of the design, sadly this is one thing I've struggled with for a while, but I'm slowing improving ^^
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Propower [2015-03-19 00:07:50 +0000 UTC]
Wow. This is a pretty cool idea. Kudos!
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Sakura2k9 [2015-02-05 07:40:59 +0000 UTC]
Nice!!!!!!!!!
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coolbot100x [2015-02-04 20:43:46 +0000 UTC]
yes... just... yes
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Spiritomb1231 [2015-02-02 21:50:37 +0000 UTC]
She's quite the cutie, nice job bro. :3
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Majorasfan In reply to EmpressLaurosaurus [2015-02-02 21:50:23 +0000 UTC]
Indeed, you don't see many female Samurott as well, but this is quite good
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