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Thanks to ~ShavaniDray , I'm getting into this whole Giant/Tiny thing.

So here are a pair of new characters, a direct result of this new interest.

EDIT: I've begun writing my story for these two. It goes far beyond what I wrote down there, trust me.
Here ya go: [link] /EDIT

Nyenth is the bird-girl-thing, seen as a disgrace on her family since she's two-colored. The desired look among her species is a pure, solid color. Patterns are seen as a sign of poor breeding, impure blood, weakness, and stupidity. Nyenth's parents tried to get her to dye her feathers and hair so that she'd appear pure brown, but she refused. Eventually tiring of the issue, she ran -or flew, I suppose- from home to start a new life on her own.
It was in this pursuit that she met Hoch, a giant who was also in the middle of running away.
His problem was similar, but at the same time different. He was seen as a fool or an idiot among his people, despite being quite intelligent. His flaw? He stutters.

I'd like to quote the book I'm currently reading, The White Dragon, to describe what happened next.
"You were there. I was there. Now we are together."

They hang out, wander around, and have fun.
I can imagine them singing 'The Bear Necessities'... Sorta.

I'd like some feedback here, but not on the anatomy since I know it's pretty bleh.
Instead of saying I don't really like how this turned out, I'm going to say that I hope to improve beyond this, and soon.

Description
Thanks to ~ShavaniDray , I'm getting into this whole Giant/Tiny thing.

So here are a pair of new characters, a direct result of this new interest.

EDIT: I've begun writing my story for these two. It goes far beyond what I wrote down there, trust me.
Here ya go: [link] /EDIT

Nyenth is the bird-girl-thing, seen as a disgrace on her family since she's two-colored. The desired look among her species is a pure, solid color. Patterns are seen as a sign of poor breeding, impure blood, weakness, and stupidity. Nyenth's parents tried to get her to dye her feathers and hair so that she'd appear pure brown, but she refused. Eventually tiring of the issue, she ran -or flew, I suppose- from home to start a new life on her own.
It was in this pursuit that she met Hoch, a giant who was also in the middle of running away.
His problem was similar, but at the same time different. He was seen as a fool or an idiot among his people, despite being quite intelligent. His flaw? He stutters.

I'd like to quote the book I'm currently reading, The White Dragon, to describe what happened next.
"You were there. I was there. Now we are together."

They hang out, wander around, and have fun.
I can imagine them singing 'The Bear Necessities'... Sorta.

I'd like some feedback here, but not on the anatomy since I know it's pretty bleh.
Instead of saying I don't really like how this turned out, I'm going to say that I hope to improve beyond this, and soon.