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Xai0 — Request : Nayumi

Published: 2011-12-22 17:51:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 374; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 3
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Description //is feeling extremely unsatisfied with my own art recently

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Nayumi belongs to

sorry for not doing a better job

Comments and critiques are forever welcome ^^
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Comments: 8

Haydaad [2011-12-27 19:39:33 +0000 UTC]

Lovely portrait. Excellent job! Thanks for sharing.

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Xai0 In reply to Haydaad [2011-12-28 05:32:01 +0000 UTC]

thank youu!!

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monaolivia [2011-12-25 17:06:01 +0000 UTC]

She is very beautiful!

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Xai0 In reply to monaolivia [2011-12-27 12:09:54 +0000 UTC]

thank youu!

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monaolivia In reply to Xai0 [2011-12-27 21:11:26 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

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Yuki-nekoLin [2011-12-25 14:38:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm not a very good critiq but I will try... Well I like the shades and folds on her dress They looked really detailed, though the light is a little unclear on the upper part (the lower part of the skirt is fine ) The little fold at the left lower part of her skirt confuses me though. Her *cough* breast, should *cough* face the right more because her right breast looks bigger than the left in this way. There's still a few problems, but I'm not entirely sure. Overall, the whole thing looks very well done, and I love the frame~

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Xai0 In reply to Yuki-nekoLin [2011-12-27 12:09:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks for taking the time to critique! ;w;
and i agree with what you said.
Will look out for the ahermbreast mistake next time. I didn't notice that till you mentioned it X'D
Thanks!!

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Yuki-nekoLin In reply to Xai0 [2011-12-27 17:53:55 +0000 UTC]

No problem (You might have to look out for the shoulders as well)

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