Comments: 8
Nightb1ade [2009-05-14 18:03:38 +0000 UTC]
Ah! I have no idea who they are but it is an excellent page. I'm so excited for you to be doing this as a career btw! And yes i agree about panel 2.
The only thing i can think with the fuzzy is levels and contrast...maybe a mask? I dont know *shrugs* I always fix that kinda stuff in photoshop after i scan it.
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RussH [2009-04-13 12:54:08 +0000 UTC]
Booster, Beetle and Impulse?
Works for me!
Not sure about the main panel - Booster looks a little short there. Could be the ear thing as Chiri-Ken said. Could also be his neck. Also, Beetle's costume is a little off around the upper chest, but you've captured their pesonalities there, wich is arguably more important.
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TheArtfulMegalodon [2009-04-13 01:49:31 +0000 UTC]
Smudgy gray? Either slide the levels to lighten the whole thing OR for spot smudgies, take the dodge tool set to "highlights" with a big fuzzy brush (the second set), middle-range opacity, and gently brush it out. Yes, maybe?
Still no Editor's Day news. Got anything?
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chiri-ken [2009-04-12 23:24:17 +0000 UTC]
I love Beetle's facial expressions. XD If I have any critique's, they're simply that the perspective of panel two feels odd (but I like the overall composition of it immensely) and the placement of Booster's head in panel 4 seems slightly off (it might actually just be his ear throwing things off--it looks awfully low). Oh, and the angle on the foremost fin of that flying thingie in panel 3. Other than that, I love it. The detail in the backgrounds is lovely, and I really want to know what they're saying! Some part of me wants to dub that last panel with a "Nyuk nyuk nyuk" kind of laugh. No idea why. ^__^;;
Give me more pages. As your manager, I demand productivity, woman! *nag nag*
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Noe-Izumi [2009-04-12 22:06:03 +0000 UTC]
You're amazing!
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