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DubuGomdori — Marvel Fantastic Four TryOut Page 5
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Another Script I'm using from Glass house.PAGE FIVE –
* Start with a strip of 6 narrow panels across the top. We show:
* A close-up of Ben’s right eye.
* Close-up of a gunfighter’s right eye, with a scar over it.
* Ben’s hand twiches over a gun.
* Gunfigher’s hand twitches over a gun.
* Ben’s FF sybmol on his shorts.
* Western symbol on gunfighter’s belt.
* We CUT TO: Ben Grimm. He’s in his FF blue shorts, a big cowboy hat, boots, and gun holsters. He’s about to have a gunfight, so his hands are poised above the pistols, ready to “draw.”
* We CUT TO: Reed Richards, in his FF costume, yelling, stretching toward him. “No, Ben — don’t draw! DUCK!”
* “DRAW!” A mean-looking old gunfighter draws his pistol, firing fast.
* “I said…DUCK!” Reed stretches fast, whipping around Ben and yanking him out of the way. Big bullets fly by –
* — EXPLODING in whatever’s behind them. “Wha–? Armor-piercing shells? HERE??”
Materials Used:
11x17 Strathmore Bristol Board
grahite and mechanical pencil
digitally inked in Photoshop
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Comments: 9
oh oh oh !!! I LOVE THIS ONE TOO *_* Holy cow ! xDDD it's too well done XDD the 2 last panel are lovely, kinda very expresive. Keep on that way !!!
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I completely agree with and , there's a real improvement beetwen your fantastic four pages and your X-Men pages. It seems like that your drawing skills are more at ease with the FF Powers, or perhaps it's due to the script which offers more more variety of scenes.
I can't wait to see your work on AVENGERS ASSEMBLE! or MY SPIDER SENSE IS TINGLING as well
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Ha ha ha, it's amazing how you can just pick up some of what I was going through just looking at the pages. I guess it's because art is so subjective, you can't help but transfer something of the inside to the outside. Yeah, you guessed it, I was more relaxed or more like F' this I don't care anymore I'm just gonna do what I like to do. Stop trying so hard to fit in and so on. Oh so you do know the other script pages like the Avengers eh?
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With more than a week of delay, I'm not sure to know the scrpits pages of Avengers you're going to draw, but once upon a time, i read a comics titled like that.
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There's definitely a marked improvement between these and your X-Men pages! I'm really diggin' these superhero tryouts you're doing! As an Avengers fan, I'd love to see you tackle them or Spider-Man, if you do anymore. ^_^
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Your wish is my command. First though, I'm waiting to get a script from a pro. I have to work on those, then I believe there's an Avengers script I can work on. So, stay tuned. AVENGERS ASSEMBLE! or will it be MY SPIDER SENSE IS TINGLING!
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i thought your x-men try-outs were good & was thinking they'd be your top notch/ best standard. but here these are & .. there's so much more to your fantastic 4 pages.
a stack of more detail in these, that's immediately obvious. and the time you've taken seems more intensive in these than the x-men try-outs.
from translating the script to pencils it looks like a superb job. i was looking for a fault all the way through but i only managed 1 small fault which is Reed's hand in the 8th panel above.. it seems his thumb is on the wrong side of his right hand... although i might be seeing the perspective wrong altogether.
it seems you've kept more of your style in these pages, which makes it all that much better. 
great work
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Oh wow. Thanks for that. Good one. Let me check that out. I'll have to make sure not to do that in the future.
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