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This X-Men script I'm using was taken from the try out page from Glass House Graphics. Some of the lingo I don't quite understand, so hoping to get some feedback and critique especially from industry professionals would be much appreciated.

Page 3 Script
Big panel! Exterior, summer, 6 pm, but still daylight — a monster (make it up) is terrorizing a New York Street! It’s ripped a lamppost out of the street and swinging it around. People are reacting, frightened. Traffic Jam. And so forth. Lots of action and commotion. CUT BACK TO: Jean and Scott. Sexy action as Jean peels out of her dress as she goes for her costume. Scott yanks off his tie as they prepare to fight. (Beefcake shot!) CUT BACK TO: What’s happening on the street! Damage and destruction!

Time: 10hrs
Tools: graphite,marker,.05 mechanical, 11x17 Strathmore Bristol and X-Men comics

Description
This X-Men script I'm using was taken from the try out page from Glass House Graphics. Some of the lingo I don't quite understand, so hoping to get some feedback and critique especially from industry professionals would be much appreciated.

Page 3 Script
Big panel! Exterior, summer, 6 pm, but still daylight — a monster (make it up) is terrorizing a New York Street! It’s ripped a lamppost out of the street and swinging it around. People are reacting, frightened. Traffic Jam. And so forth. Lots of action and commotion. CUT BACK TO: Jean and Scott. Sexy action as Jean peels out of her dress as she goes for her costume. Scott yanks off his tie as they prepare to fight. (Beefcake shot!) CUT BACK TO: What’s happening on the street! Damage and destruction!

Time: 10hrs
Tools: graphite,marker,.05 mechanical, 11x17 Strathmore Bristol and X-Men comics