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This X-Men script I'm using was taken from the try out page from Glass House Graphics. Some of the lingo I don't quite understand, so hoping to get some feedback and critique especially from industry professionals would be much appreciated.

Page 5 Script
…But Jean Grey flies in and scoops the child out of harm’s way. Now: Choreograph an action scene as Phoenix and Cyclops fire power blasts at the monster, who hurls a car at them. They use their powers to stop it, as another one of the X-Men ROGUE, flies in from above (Rogue is always posed very curvy/sexy in flight), having heard the police reports. The monster’s eyes glow, and send a brilliant flash of light and heat at them (like we saw on page 2), hot enough to melt things near it.

Time: 6hrs
Tools: graphite,marker,.05 mechanical, 11x17 Strathmore Bristol and X-Men comics

Description
This X-Men script I'm using was taken from the try out page from Glass House Graphics. Some of the lingo I don't quite understand, so hoping to get some feedback and critique especially from industry professionals would be much appreciated.

Page 5 Script
…But Jean Grey flies in and scoops the child out of harm’s way. Now: Choreograph an action scene as Phoenix and Cyclops fire power blasts at the monster, who hurls a car at them. They use their powers to stop it, as another one of the X-Men ROGUE, flies in from above (Rogue is always posed very curvy/sexy in flight), having heard the police reports. The monster’s eyes glow, and send a brilliant flash of light and heat at them (like we saw on page 2), hot enough to melt things near it.

Time: 6hrs
Tools: graphite,marker,.05 mechanical, 11x17 Strathmore Bristol and X-Men comics