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xDemonxAkumax — .:Shut up:.

Published: 2010-01-01 04:40:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1807; Favourites: 56; Downloads: 19
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Description Dai was shocked. His sister had disappeared, right when he needed her the most. In front of him stood two men, each clad in black robes with red clouds imprinted on the cloth. One was tall and had long blond hair that covered one eye, and the other was short and small, with a mask and a wide straw hat covering his face. A bell tinkled softly, dangling from the brim.

The blond smirked. "You're all alone now, kid. No one's gonna come help you, um."

Dai shook his head hard, still in shock. "No! Suzuki wouldn't abandon me like that! You did something to her!"

The short one grunted. "Deidara, you're wasting time."

The blond, now known as Deidara, turned to the shorter one. "Master Sasori, you must know that what I say is true. No one is going to help him."

"Be that as it may, Deidara, we still need to get going."

Dai's eyes widened and then narrowed. His hands twitched, a golden chakra glowing faintly at his fingertips. "Shut up..."

The two turned back to Dai. "Hm?"

Dai roared and his hands exploded with gold chakra, his eyes glowing as well. "Shut UP!! You LIARS!!!" he shouted, unconsciously throwing his hand out at the blond.

Before he knew it, he was on the ground, being held by the blond named Deidara. He struggled, but paused when something red splattered the grass next to his face. He craned his head to look at his captor.

Deidara was clutching his shoulder with one hand, wincing in pain. Blood soaked the cloth around his injury and the cloak was ripped and shredded. Dai could see a deep gash across his shoulder and bicep.

"D-did I do that?!"
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Dai discovers his kekkei genkai, but not in time to save his sister, who was killed only a couple minutes later.

That's right, the Chinatsu family has its own little kekkei genkai. They can use a golden chakra to attack, defend, or mend injuries. It's a remnant of the clan's demon ancestor, a class-A demon by the name of Kira. So, in a way, the chakra is demonic, but only in origin.

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Comments: 29

jessicawaddell [2021-06-24 15:33:59 +0000 UTC]

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PaxiPeanut [2010-01-18 00:01:52 +0000 UTC]

omg
He's so cute when he's mad

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xDemonxAkumax In reply to PaxiPeanut [2010-01-18 01:01:55 +0000 UTC]

he is <3

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Izzy502 [2010-01-02 23:28:30 +0000 UTC]

uou! that draw it's very cool and he's cute when he's angry xD

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xDemonxAkumax In reply to Izzy502 [2010-01-02 23:35:49 +0000 UTC]

i didn't draw it, it was a base but thanks
and yeah, he is <3

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Izzy502 In reply to xDemonxAkumax [2010-01-02 23:40:32 +0000 UTC]

oh, ok. but well, it's good the same xD (it's full of errors but well xD)

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xDemonxAkumax In reply to Izzy502 [2010-01-02 23:50:32 +0000 UTC]

full of errors? O.o

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Izzy502 In reply to xDemonxAkumax [2010-01-03 15:02:52 +0000 UTC]

it's not you. my english it's a little bad xD

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xDemonxAkumax In reply to Izzy502 [2010-01-03 20:11:54 +0000 UTC]

ohh, ok XD
it's alright, I can understand you ^^ I have lots of foreign friends XD

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Izzy502 In reply to xDemonxAkumax [2010-01-04 14:15:16 +0000 UTC]

ah, that's good x)

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xDemonxAkumax In reply to Izzy502 [2010-01-04 21:30:50 +0000 UTC]

haha, lots of people can't understand American english XDDD we've kind of messed the language up

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Izzy502 In reply to xDemonxAkumax [2010-01-04 21:42:24 +0000 UTC]

hummm... okok... x)

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xDemonxAkumax In reply to Izzy502 [2010-01-04 21:48:11 +0000 UTC]

XD

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DEIDARA-CHAN96 [2010-01-01 22:34:14 +0000 UTC]

I like the story line.

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Annichole [2010-01-01 16:27:10 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! *O*

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RachelUchiha [2010-01-01 15:35:46 +0000 UTC]

cool

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Metal-Zealot [2010-01-01 05:54:40 +0000 UTC]

Cool!
Hey Dai. Long time no see.

In your little written section, but you said 'with a mask covering his face and a wide straw hat covering his face.
Tis not good to repeat. Just a little advice. ^^

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xDemonxAkumax In reply to Metal-Zealot [2010-01-01 17:34:04 +0000 UTC]

thanks X3
lol yeah bringing him back ^^

I wrote this at 2 in the morning XDDD of course it's gonna have mistakes
thanks for pointing that out though ^^

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YoshinoClan1 [2010-01-01 04:58:12 +0000 UTC]

omg sooo awesome <3333 poor dai D8

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xDemonxAkumax In reply to YoshinoClan1 [2010-01-01 05:04:21 +0000 UTC]

thanks X333
yeah D: poor Dai...

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KiyokoAtsuki [2010-01-01 04:47:12 +0000 UTC]


Really, that picture is stunning.
I saw it in my inbox and I went all: OMG PRETTEH!!
I love it really!

Good job on the lightning neh

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xDemonxAkumax In reply to KiyokoAtsuki [2010-01-01 04:55:04 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you think so! <3
LOL did you really?
me too <3333
thank chuu~!
lighting was a bitch XD

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KiyokoAtsuki In reply to xDemonxAkumax [2010-01-02 03:39:40 +0000 UTC]

REALLY I did XD

XD You're welcome 83

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amechewer [2010-01-01 04:42:14 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Nice storyline AND nice use of a base! the lighting, too.

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xDemonxAkumax In reply to amechewer [2010-01-01 04:46:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks X3 for both
yeah, the lighting was a bitch >.> always is XD

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amechewer In reply to xDemonxAkumax [2010-01-01 04:50:35 +0000 UTC]

Ha, i know why,too. Still, you did great. I couldn't top that, for sure!

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xDemonxAkumax In reply to amechewer [2010-01-01 04:53:24 +0000 UTC]

aw, don't say that ^^ if you practice, I know you could!

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amechewer In reply to xDemonxAkumax [2010-01-01 04:56:24 +0000 UTC]

*blushes* THANKIES! *sniff*

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xDemonxAkumax In reply to amechewer [2010-01-01 04:59:33 +0000 UTC]

not a problem!

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