n-ambrusco [2015-02-07 18:15:46 +0000 UTC]
This is good, but I wish it went even further. I wish Jess's boyfriend liked Alex better than boring old Jess. I wish Alex danced with the football captain, and they both got turned on by it. I wish Alex made out with one of the teacher chaperones, and somebody got a photo for double blackmail. This is good, but if you raised the stakes, it would be even better.
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