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XfallingloveX — The painted wall
Published: 2009-03-04 20:35:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 140; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Your broken heart painted on a wall for all to see.
False pretenses falling through, and your burning rage
boils up inside like a sun ready to burst into a super
nova of self righteousness.
Your bloody hands drip onto the floor like crimson tears
shed for the departed.
And that painted wall sits there and mocks you. It
strips you of all your secrets, your wishes, and sacred
memories, like a page being torn from its bindings in a
book.
For this problem there is No divine intervention, just you
and a sea of prejudices, shouting and mocking you for
just trying to be you.
Your wings viciously ripped from your back, you lay on the
ground, gravity to much to bear. Nothing really can stop
this feeling of unacceptance.
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Comments: 6

jamoona2 [2009-03-05 01:42:03 +0000 UTC]

Yeah i was just about to say. dude, imagery! Ty just accept your an awesome writer with a way of making words sound so deep and ahhh! It was a great one.

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XfallingloveX In reply to jamoona2 [2009-03-05 04:58:30 +0000 UTC]

i might have to accept it...but i think its too short and i cant edit it any more : <

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jamoona2 In reply to XfallingloveX [2009-03-06 01:31:16 +0000 UTC]

You can, just need to get inspired and healthy again :]

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XfallingloveX In reply to jamoona2 [2009-03-06 23:55:40 +0000 UTC]

o im better...

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Placebo-Inquiry [2009-03-04 20:40:49 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Intense. The imagery was really vivid.

"gravity to much to bear". I really like that line.

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XfallingloveX In reply to Placebo-Inquiry [2009-03-04 20:46:56 +0000 UTC]

thnx : 3

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