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Published: 2007-07-01 06:11:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 190; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description Love
At 7:15

Is when dying blue skies
Meet sun-burned clouds;

Lavender.
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Comments: 9

spyke1of24 [2007-12-22 18:17:45 +0000 UTC]

I realy like this one. I think i would drop the "is when" i dont know why but it erks me lol.

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xiccibanx In reply to spyke1of24 [2007-12-23 02:00:27 +0000 UTC]

lol thanks

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spyke1of24 In reply to xiccibanx [2007-12-23 05:44:47 +0000 UTC]

Tell me dude. what was your inspiration?

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xiccibanx In reply to spyke1of24 [2007-12-23 15:55:08 +0000 UTC]

The sky lol, I went out and saw this amazing lavender sky one day and I was like whoa.

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ClaudiaCasanova [2007-07-03 00:52:00 +0000 UTC]

Vivid imagery and good use of descriptive words!

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xiccibanx In reply to ClaudiaCasanova [2007-07-03 02:52:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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tearzdr0p [2007-07-02 05:16:05 +0000 UTC]

colorful is what i describe...once again, beautiful =]
i really love these short poems you write

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xiccibanx In reply to tearzdr0p [2007-07-02 05:36:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Spykedjadedragon [2007-07-02 03:32:07 +0000 UTC]

Kirei na...

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