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EdwardRisu [2008-09-08 04:32:27 +0000 UTC]
Very different, it makes me think
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spyke1of24 [2008-08-22 05:01:06 +0000 UTC]
I agree with her. Very daring. Nice poem I love how you used a line from the poem in the title. I didnt really know what to think from the title but I have to say after reading it it was very well composed. keep up the good work man.
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xiccibanx In reply to spyke1of24 [2008-08-22 13:17:08 +0000 UTC]
I wrote this poem a little while ago actually, but I was too embarrassed to post something as... risque... as this. My writing is going in weird directions lately lol. Thanks for reading again.
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spyke1of24 In reply to xiccibanx [2008-08-23 05:47:07 +0000 UTC]
yeah but it was very well composed. A awesome read. Good job on it.
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PlaceInTheDirt [2008-08-20 17:34:50 +0000 UTC]
I hardly ever comment on poetry anymore, seeing as it's been such a long time since I posted any myself.
But I just had to read and comment this one.
It's rather brave to post, and I'm very moved by it in a strange sort of way.
It's daring and well written.
It leaves you trying to imagine exactly what was going through your head when you wrote it.
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