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xiccibanx β€” Blowjob for Warm Body by-nc-nd [NSFW]
Published: 2008-08-20 17:29:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 139; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description When you pushed
your dick against my mouth
saying shh, shh,
I whimpered
my lips closed, wet
from your saliva, your sweat,
or your pre-cum;
I don’t know anymore
the difference between
your tongue and your sex
stabbing me,
no more soft warm kisses
just me shivering,
head whipping on your
white sheets crumpled and
sticky with the gel from my hair,
as if saying shh, shh,
made sense
when the last thing I wanted was to
open my mouth, to
let you in-
I did,
only because I said before
to negotiate,
a blowjob for your warm body
because it was
too cold
in your air-conditioned room,
but you’re too big
and your aftertaste too salty
for my cold lips
chapped
and bleeding.
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Comments: 7

EdwardRisu [2008-09-08 04:32:27 +0000 UTC]

Very different, it makes me think

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xiccibanx In reply to EdwardRisu [2008-09-08 04:47:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for reading

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spyke1of24 [2008-08-22 05:01:06 +0000 UTC]

I agree with her. Very daring. Nice poem I love how you used a line from the poem in the title. I didnt really know what to think from the title but I have to say after reading it it was very well composed. keep up the good work man.

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xiccibanx In reply to spyke1of24 [2008-08-22 13:17:08 +0000 UTC]

I wrote this poem a little while ago actually, but I was too embarrassed to post something as... risque... as this. My writing is going in weird directions lately lol. Thanks for reading again.

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spyke1of24 In reply to xiccibanx [2008-08-23 05:47:07 +0000 UTC]

yeah but it was very well composed. A awesome read. Good job on it.

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PlaceInTheDirt [2008-08-20 17:34:50 +0000 UTC]

I hardly ever comment on poetry anymore, seeing as it's been such a long time since I posted any myself.
But I just had to read and comment this one.
It's rather brave to post, and I'm very moved by it in a strange sort of way.
It's daring and well written.
It leaves you trying to imagine exactly what was going through your head when you wrote it.

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xiccibanx In reply to PlaceInTheDirt [2008-08-20 18:18:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot for reading

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