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xLittleHoshi — Dancing All Night!
Published: 2013-12-18 07:19:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 674; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 0
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Hey guys
!This is Hikari and Hiroyuki form my manga '' Just Dance!''!
I was talking with about my watercolour pieces and we came across the fact that they were in lact of contrast. So doing this one I tried to add more of it and, I think, it worked pretty well! I'm really happy about this drawing actually (:!!
And also, it's my first time at doing a man torso in watercolor haha! I had a lot of fun doing it xD!
<3
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° Material : Canson watercolour paper, Winsor & Newton/ Pebeo watercolour, Faber-Castell watercolor pencils, sakura pigma 0.5, 0.2 and brush, Pebeo white ink, Faber castell colouring pencil, Sharpie water based paint pencil.
(c) Art and Characters By xLittleHoshi ( aka Hoshi3437 )
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Hi! this is my first critique, and i wasn't really sure about doing it, but at the end i thought your image deserve it. Hope it helps.
I have to say i'm very surprised about this picture and your gallery at general. Mostly is the impact i recieve about your tendence to fill every space of the field, something i would try on my own works. The volumes at the human figures are pretty well indicated at the colouring the majority of times, but at the boy's face it seems to be more confusing.
The anathomy is nice specially in the girl. Again the boy seems to have problems: The neck seems hieratic, the left hand is small and the feet too.
The background, as i said i like the way you fill the whole picture, the details are pretty good and tells me how much effort you have made to put your vision on the paper. The only thing i'm not pleased to see are the buildings, that seems not to have the same effort that the rest and that sadly is afecting the whole ilustration. I think the buildings could not be there and the sky could be in a more contrasting treatement to make a perfect frame for the two characters.
The aesthetics is cute, warm and charming, is something that inspires me to draw, and this is one of the things i love about your style. It reminds me to Ayumi Shiina or Kanan Minami in some ways.
Your vision is enormus, you seems to be a person who's allways daydreaming in imaginating the scenes you draw.
About originality, i think the characters are good, but they're not something i would remember, the girl seems to be a normal girl, nothing too memorable. Now the boy's design is much more memorable.
The Technique is very very well, i think you should take more time to polish all the details of your work, because i can see you can do more impresive artworks. not complete four stars because of the confusing volumes on the boy anathomy.
The impact, i said it before, is good, that's 'couse i decided to write the critique. Why i'm not giving the 5 stars, because i think there is even much more to see about your skills.
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Hi there (:! Thanks a lot for the critic it makes me really happy I'm honoured to be your first critic too haha <3!
Okay I see! Yeah that's true! I still need practice for my boy anatomy and fluidity, I'll continue working on that!
Thanks! Well, I've add the buildings because of two things: The first one was the colour of the hydrangea and the second one was that without them, there was a lack of something in my opinion and if I had did them more detailed it would have been too much details in that area. But yeah I understand what you say, I'll try to make it an other way the next time it happens, thanks for pointing that out (:!
Thanks a lot (:! I've never read manga of those artists, I think I should do it haha!
Aw thanks a lot <3!! For the characters okay, I'll look for that, actually they're the protagonists of one of my stories so I'll try to make that better haha!
Well, thanks again for the critic! It really helps, I'll take care of what you said and do my best to improve!
Have a great day (: <3
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So glad it was a good critique
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Oh nice thanks! I note that! I'll look forward this! Looks interesting 
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The way you add creases to clothes is fantastic ^_^
You're incredible at using watercolours
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Thansk a lot! doing creases is one of the things I like the more in drawing/ colouring! I'm happy to see you like the way I do it <33!
Aww thanks a lot for your kind words <3 I've been trying really hard since I start using it, it's fun to see that people like my colouring style <3 (:
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Wow, I love her pants/leggins whatever, so beautiful...you colour very well with watercolour!
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Aw thanks a lot again! And talking of Tanemura-sensei, I start using watercolour because of her haha! In the past I tought that her ink works was in watercolour hahaha! And I'm really happy of that mistake because I love a lot doing this haha!
Welcome!! I really enjoy your style ( and Stiles hahaha [ cheesy joke, sorry xD] )! I'm also a big fanboy of the Sterek pairing haha <3
Thanks again <3
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Wow, now that you say it, Tanemuras colours do looks so gentle n soft like watercolours, never really thought about it, what a lucky mistake right
(Awesome joke!) We're definitelly on the same ship here!
You're very welcome!
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Haha yeah (:!!
Aww thanks! But it comes with practice, seriously, at first I was really bad at it haha!
Oh yeah hahaha! They're so perfect together haha <3 And omg.. have you seen the final of the season... I don't know what to think XD They blew my mind xD!!
<3
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Wow, you're awesome!
Oh yeah, I've seen it, after all this waiting for some interaction between them, it just wasn't enough for me though haha, I mean, Derek had been carrying this whole Sterek thing the whole 3b season and...ah man, idk, I fear Jeff Davis is making fun of us all
Hey, but Nogi!Stiles was super, amazing acting...
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Yeah hahahah! Each time they where together I was like.. More.. more... moreeeee D: Hahaha! Yeah he's trolling us so much! I mean.. that's rude of him hahha xD! They could be so perfect being together haha <3 At least we can have some little fan-services spots in some episodes haha! Yeah! I've read tons of little comics and strips between those guys, my friend is desperate each time she sees I'm reading those xD Pretty funny haha!
Omg! Yeah! He was so intense, he a really good actor all the time I just wanted to hug him ad try to comfort him! I'm really happy they put him in the middle of the main story for this season it was really well play!
Also I can't wait for the season 4... I'm pretty excited to see what will happen!
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Haha, so true, soooo true
Just worried the 4th season might end up being a bunch of rubbish hah, lots of new actors coming, that Kate bussiness and Malia and all....ah man, idk really, curious how they handle it, true....at least there is still Derek and Stiles though
Cheers
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Yeah I'm wondering about that too! The end of 3B had so much movement, coming in vs coming out and all the stuff! I really can't wait to see what they'll do with that! Also the fact that Danny knows about werewolves!?
Yeah same here, because of Lydia I've been a little obsess with Banshees lately hahaha! I love them so much xD
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I agree!
Now that you mention it, Banshees do sound interresting...
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Yeah really!
At first I thought that TW had changed a lot the banshee myth, but, in fact, when I looked up more I found out that it was exact! Did you know that rich people used to have banshees in their families to alert them when somebody was about to die? Also, when someone important dies sometimes some banshees regroup to cry together! Would be interesting if they do something like that in TW hahaha! Ok ok, I stop there! I could continue all night hahaha! <3
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Wow, but that thing about rich ppl having banshees sounds really interesting! I would certainly read such stuff, or watch or whatever
Haha, don't worry around talking/writing too much, I like reading what ppl got to say, plus is always something interesting from you!^^
Cheerios~~
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Aww you're sweet haha <3!
But yeah, the banshee thing is really something that can be developed in general even if they're not that know! I wish TW will develop Lydia and everything she lives around the banshee thing a bit more haha!
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I don't even know about TW anymore haha, didn't really watch the new season past first episode...or maybe the second too. Just didn't like it much anymore, ah well! Suppose still no Lydia develop then? Sad hmm...
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Really
I really enjoyed it personally hahaha! You should give it a second try 
They developed her a bit, but I feel that I know her and the banshee thing less than I did before the season hahaha!!
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Oh, thanks, maybe I will!
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Ahahaha omg! I've got into this too hahahahahha! So awesome! I'm at season four at the moment hahahaha! Soooooo Goood omg!!!! Can't stop to watch it hahaha! Oppps XD
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Hah, told ya! Glad you enjoy it too!!
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Ahaha yeah! You were right haha! And... omg Castiel is just so..... smexy.
In fact like teen wolf... everybody is like cute or handsome or sexy... omgad...
And love the plot so far!
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Oh yea, Cas is the best...plus some other angels, I adore
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Ohhhh I can't wait to buy the other seasons, omgggg hahaha! Gonna be awesome ojiiorj43oifjoirjforijfiofjoiw hahahaha!
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Quite the lively piece, colour seem all vibrant and the people seem to match the level of excitement, good show
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Je t'avais déjà fait une critique en direct (sur fb hanhan) de ce dessin, mais j'ai bien envie de commenter ici :3
J'adore l'ambiance, je trouve que tu l'as vraiment bien réussie, l'effet dans le ciel est super joli, les couleurs s'harmonisent bien et tout :3
J'aime beaucoup les leggings de la fille, et la pose des personnages; ça fait naturel et pas figé.
Et le lampadaire est bien placé ! Mais je crois te l'avoir déjà dit ça xD
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Yeaye ~ Merci hahaha <3
Merci <33
Oui~~ Bah les leggings sont la raison même du dessin en fait hahaha! J'voulais faire un dessin avec les leggings de Va <3 xD
Ouais j'essaye de briser le côté statique que mes personnages ont souvent
Ouais haha <3
Merci pour tes gentils mots Bella<3
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