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Published: 2014-04-17 07:02:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 650; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 2
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Description Hey guys!
I actually thing this is one of my best piece ever... I love it so much, omg!
I've tried to work harder on the ambient atmosphere and I think it worked! Also I'm pretty excited since it's the '' cover '' of the first chapter of my webcomic! Please take a look! It's pretty new but I'll upload it weekly ! This story is inspiring me so much <3 


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Love you guys~ <3 

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° Material : Canson watercolour paper, Winsor & Newton/ Pebeo watercolour, Faber-Castell watercolor pencils, sakura pigma 0.5, 0.2 and brush, Pebeo white ink, Faber castell colouring pencil, Sharpie water based paint pencil.

(c) Art and Characters By xLittleHoshi ( aka Hoshi3437 )
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Rukior [2014-04-20 19:16:41 +0000 UTC]

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Une critique pour tenter de t'aider au maximum : sur la perspective, je ne peux rien te reprocher, le paysage est très vivant, l’atmosphère doux que du dégage de ton dessin est vraiment très agréable, tu est vraiment doué pour l'aquarelle ! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> en revanche, je trouve la position de ton personnage un peut hasardeuse, surtout sa jambe droite, je crois avoir compris ce que tu voulais faire, mais ça rend le personnage trop statique et raide. Le genre de dessin que tu as l'habitude de faire a besoin d'un peut plus de souplesse dans les traits et la position du personnage, je suis certain que tu en est capable car tu arrive à retranscrire cette souplesse dans le décor. Un dernier petit détail pas forcément utile, son œil droit, si tu l'avais décalé de quelques millimetres sur la gauche, je pense que ça aurais amélioré un peu le dessin, mais vu ce que le rendu au final tu as beaucoup de mérite pour avoir achevé ce chef-d'oeuvre ! continue de nous faire rêver :3

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xLittleHoshi In reply to Rukior [2014-10-21 19:02:27 +0000 UTC]

Hey! Merci!! Désolé du délai incroyable de ma réponse haha!

Merci ! J'aime beaucoup travailler des atmosphères différentes et tout, m'enfin j'essaie d'en faire, ça fonctionne pas toujours comme je veux haha!

Ouais, avec le recul j'le vois vraiment haha! Merci de me le dire xD! J,essaie de faire des poses plus originales en général, mais j'ai parfois de la misère à sortir de mon patern de vue de trois quart xDD

Aww Merci ;__;!!
De nouveaux dessins devraient arriver dans les prochaines semaines haha <3

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Nuboru [2014-04-17 11:11:31 +0000 UTC]

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I start saying this is a really beautiful picture. I love the calm and serene atmosphere of the scene. The background is well drawn and I love how you used your watercolors for the grass.
But you should practice with gesture and anatomy, because I have the impression that the character is floating. I would have colored with a darker green under the girl, for the shadow of her body. Last thing: in my opinion, her head looks too turned, and I have the impression her position is a bit unnatural.
However, the general impact of the drawing is good, and I appreciate all the effort you put in the making of the details, such as the books and the grass.
You did a great work, keep it up! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

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xLittleHoshi In reply to Nuboru [2014-10-21 18:55:02 +0000 UTC]

Hii!! Thanks a lot for the critique, I'm really happy!! Sorry for the late reply tho ;__;

Thanks! I experimented a lot with the grass on this, happy to see it turned out well (:!!

Yeah, that's true I can see it too! Thanks I'll lokk up to that more the next time! Yeah that isn't really natural, it's a bit forced haha!

Thanks a looot again!! I'll keep all that in head (:!!

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pandalovexo [2014-04-17 07:23:42 +0000 UTC]

Btw how did you add the white lines?

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xLittleHoshi In reply to pandalovexo [2014-04-17 07:38:42 +0000 UTC]

Which ones xD? Actually There a lot of white use here.
The grass effect and the white lines ( on trees or the water reflects ) are done with a Water based paint Sharpie! You probably can find it in a basic Art Store!
And the white splashy effect is done with acrylic! I mix it with a bit of water and pain my finger all over the piece and it do that haha! You also can you a teeth brush! 
Hope I helped !

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pandalovexo In reply to xLittleHoshi [2014-04-17 07:43:16 +0000 UTC]

and ty! i'm currently still getting the hang of this water color mess! XD
i'm really an amateur when it comes to water colors..

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xLittleHoshi In reply to pandalovexo [2014-10-21 19:13:56 +0000 UTC]

You welcome !

Ahaha! I was a big mess when I started haha! It's like everything you just have to fight and keep it up to get better (:!!

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pandalovexo In reply to xLittleHoshi [2014-04-17 07:42:20 +0000 UTC]

It's so neat. I really like the effect that the white lines put on the art piece. It seems really lively. I'm sure it took hours for you to get to this perfection! it's really good. ^_^

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xLittleHoshi In reply to pandalovexo [2014-10-21 19:14:57 +0000 UTC]

Aww thanks a lot<3
Yup it took a lot of hard work to get where I am now, and I still have to learn, that's what is nice with art, you never stop to learn !

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pandalovexo [2014-04-17 07:22:06 +0000 UTC]

It's good

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xLittleHoshi In reply to pandalovexo [2014-04-17 07:34:36 +0000 UTC]

Aww thanks a lot <3

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HitoriMaron [2014-04-17 07:11:22 +0000 UTC]

Such a magical picture, good job!

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xLittleHoshi In reply to HitoriMaron [2014-04-17 07:24:57 +0000 UTC]

Aww thanks a lot <3 
I'm trying pretty hard to improve my ambiances so I'm happy to see that you can see what I somehow tried to do <3

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HitoriMaron In reply to xLittleHoshi [2014-04-17 07:49:00 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!  

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