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BiWolf16 In reply to ??? [2024-07-09 01:06:09 +0000 UTC]
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xNIR0x In reply to Disneybrony [2015-01-04 20:03:51 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for the compliments!! <3
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Disneybrony In reply to xNIR0x [2015-01-04 21:15:57 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! That was my first review and I'm really glad I did ok! Also did you hand draw the picture or draw it on the internet?
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xNIR0x In reply to SonodaYuu [2015-01-02 12:04:17 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry, you're not the only one who thinks it looks sexual, as about 50% of the comments are about exactly this.
I'm very glad you like it and I appreciate the feedback, thank you!! uvu
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xNIR0x In reply to boombagarmay [2015-01-01 19:46:02 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for the compliments!
The character in the bottom left is Freddy ;v; so the one in the back is golden freddy if you thought that was him uvu
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Alyssa-damour [2014-12-30 21:58:44 +0000 UTC]
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Impact
Now believe me, I love every aspect of this drawing from the close range to Mark, the glowing eyes, and the ever lingering Goldie in the background. The facial expressions especially got me. However, I have notices a few things.
Well, for one, for Freddy's head to be bent like that, unless he's on Mark's lap, it would have to be broken. Meanwhile, Bonnie would CLEARLY be the one on Mark's lap, though from his pose, I don't see how Bonnie's finger can be under Mark's chin from that position especially with his shoulder in the way, since it looks like Mark's chin is behind the shoulder. Foxy has no arm, as the hook seems to be coming from Freddy's ear, with no clear limb attached to it.
Now, this isn't a thing, but I can't help but notice- and laugh in hilarity- at the fact that Goldie seems to be eating Chica's hand (wing? You didn't make that clear), the one also holding pizza. This whole image must be a gravity shift or something, because I get none of these anatomical errors fitting together in any way.
Your style also seems to be inconsistent. You strayed from your usual thing with the eyebrows on Chica, and the dark around the eyes (shown only on Bonnie and Freddy, though in the game you can clearly see the black plastic socket around the eyes on ALL of them, if a little less on Foxy) is inconsistent to the characters also. And Goldie, where as he should be a twin of your style of Freddy but yellow-er, looks more like he does in the game- though I wasn't sure whether this was intentional or not.
Also, Mark, despite facing more towards Bonnie and Chica as is evident by the lines and eyes, appears to have a crooked nose that points the opposite way than he is looking. Also, his left (right from first person view) eye is lazy. This meaning that it doesn't line up with where he is looking that is represented by the other eye. Shading was also inconsisten in te ways of light sources. I feel that the shading here had a mind of it's own with no real laws of lighting involved. If mike is holding the tablet that lights up his face, why is Goldie so shadowed, and Freddy's face shaded in the wrong places- NOT to mention Bonnie having random highlights in places where there obviously would be NO light.
Other than that, the general expression of Mark is indescribable. I don't think there is a word for that expression- congrats on the introduction of a new expression! Wonder what you'll call it... Well, all I can really say about this that I haven't said is it's a rather unoriginal drawing as many, many, MANY... (20 years later) maaaaaaaaaaaaaaany artists have done the same thing. It's practically a meme. The technique and style consistency were a bit sloppy. But it's good in the ways of expressing character emotions and expressions.
Maybe work on: Light sourcing, sense of direction, and consistency
Like, for light sourcing, I usually take a soft brush, make a new layer, make the color yellow, expand the brush a LOT, then put a dot right in the middle (or where ever the source is) with lower opacity so it's like a flashlight on the unshaded picture. Then, find all the spots that would cast shadows from the light coming from that direction, and shade them in a darker yellow and turn down opacity (this gives the illusion that the lighting is tinting your vision when you look at the drawing, like you would see in real life) Sense of direction, just draw some perspectives, different angles of the same thing. Consistency? Just try to stick to one way of life so to speak, at a time. It you want to draw chibi, draw chibi, but don't put a chibi and realistic drawing together if it's not meant to be, it can confuse people on the character if it's inconsistent with the rest.
Don't really need work on, but I suggest you keep working with: Expressions, expressing emotions through the characters, perhaps movement implying.
You might do that by drawing exaggerated facial expressions you know and see a lot, like keyboard expressions (i.e. -w- o.o x-x .A. ene .m. T-T ;3; (/OAo)/) etc. And perhaps when seeing someone in an emotional state (or being in one yourself) try to capture that emotion in the first character that pops into your head. See if you can challenge yourself to show how they might be feeling in a fictional character. Now movement implying requires some anatomical thought. You have to think about what's on canvas, and what's off canvas that no one will see. Like Bonnie here. You clearly didn't think about how that would work. For working on movement implying, I suggest drawing full body sketches as apposed to half body fully complete images. I often do the movement myself just to see if I were standing that way how it would work, and what position would best imply our movement.
Overall, it was a well done drawing, but could use some work. Just have fun and practice. I know facial expression practice will be a hoot! I love making characters look silly with it~
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