Comments: 10
Forever-a-Zombie [2013-05-11 04:16:04 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
(Before I say anything, I just wanted to let you know that I'm not trying to be rude or anything. Plus I'm an okay artist on paper, but I definitely have more knowledge of art than I do skill.... so please don't think of me as a hypocrite. Thank you.)
In all honesty, I like this idea quite a bit and am glad that you as an artist have decided to expand your horizons. However, I do feel that it was inevitable considering that it's within human nature to want to excel. I also think that the idea of using one of your other OC's as a transition was very clever and will help people to accept your new idea. Not to mention the title, 'Project-FREAKS', priceless.
As far as your originality goes, I think you hit it out of the park. I mean the complexity of elements used in Luka are well balanced, the detail in Hania is not overdone, and the simplicity in Jonas is not to be overlooked. I can also already see how well these characters will interact with one another to some extent. Thank you for that little insight.
Next, I'd say that the vision and technique are relatively the same, still good, but the same as far as rating goes. I mean I can absolutely see the vision/inspiration, but it doesn't feel totally inspired to me, by that I mean that it doesn't feel 100% original. However, it's practically impossible to do that, so I'm still quite impressed with the overall vision. As for the technique, it obviously has room for improvement, but it still screams TALENT. So I think you did a great job on your technique. After all, the lines and detail is practically flawless for a sketch.
Last but not least, impact. For this.... I would've rated you at 7 stars if they would've let me. In other words, I will not be forgetting this idea of yours anytime soon. So, that also means that I look forward to seeing what you have in store for this idea. I also can't wait to see the other character ideas for this topic. AMAZING OVERALL WORK!!!
EXTRA: I would also like to encourage you to turn this into a literary series. Not only to help you viewers get a better perspective on this project, but also because I think that it would be quiet interesting to someone who might accidentally come across it. That, and you seem to have considerable writing talent.
(PS: There's nothing really bad to say on this. :3 )
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Lanatae [2013-05-11 05:49:19 +0000 UTC]
'Sup there, sexeh Luka.
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XombieJunky In reply to Lanatae [2013-05-11 05:54:53 +0000 UTC]
Erlerd, you're kidding, right? Lolol
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XombieJunky In reply to Lanatae [2013-05-12 04:23:56 +0000 UTC]
I don't understaaaand! skjefhskhfhsmdl
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Ow1Eyes [2013-05-11 04:20:08 +0000 UTC]
Oh i like the idea it seems pretty original but familiar at the same time (which is a rly good thing), if you need any help with this project of yours Im willing to lend a hand~
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FrostedSouls [2013-05-11 04:17:32 +0000 UTC]
they all look really great~ i love all of there designs, especially Luka //
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XombieJunky In reply to FrostedSouls [2013-05-11 04:22:29 +0000 UTC]
Hehe thank you very much~ >u<
Yesh, Luka is very popular so far.
I'dliketoseethoseassholecomparehimtoRavenfromTeenTitansnowhehe =u=
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